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A dream tells Pinkie Pie that something really great is waiting for her, so she lays out on an epic adventure to bravely go where no pony has gone before, but the road is not without challenges and perils.

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A dream tells Pinkie Pie that something really great is waiting for her, so she lays out on an epic adventure to bravely go where no pony has gone before, but the road is not without challenges and perils.

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that would make her <i>that</i> happy?

You can't be serious.

I might have to give this a review if that activity keeps up. Need to read later.

throwing parties for <i>her</i>!

You WERE serious? Really?
Well, I'll be reviewing this later for sure.
Too bad I can't do that as an official member of the TWE, since the group was closed down. :fluttercry:

!!engage ACTIVE REVIEW mode!!
Well, let's start from the start, shall we?

Little grammatical errors here n there, but nothing that ba-

She tried her best to recall any clue of the dream's contents, but the more she tried the fainter it became, until she had nothing but the memory of having the memory as proof that the dream ever existed at all.
Pinkie went outside to get some air and clear her thoughts. The dream had reminded her of her first party;

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Didn't you JUST state that Pinkie couldn't recall the dream? You turned around and said she DID remember something, unless I'm interpreting it wrong.

make her <i>that</i> happy?
throwing parties for <i>her</i>!

Don't you mean [.i][./i]? (remove periods)

But wherever should she start such a search? Duh! In the library of course!

Why the library? Because plot device, that's why!

but legend tells the cave itself became a living magical thing

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So. Living magical caves that make princesses.
Seems legit.

That's an interesting theory. Not sure on the whole 'living cave' thing, but interesting nonetheless.


Huh. Not bad. An interesting story so far, but it could probably use an editor. Little grammatical fixes and what-not. Other than that, it really isn't bad.

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Thanks for pointing that out, I was sure that worked in my other upload.

Awwwww pinkie pie:pinkiehappy:
P.s.smaybe you can read my story called my day in ponyville

Just one thing that bugged me about this. Twilight explained how Equestria was made. Pinkie was in the play, she would know how it was made. The reader would also know if they saw that episode, we don't need a frame by frame of what happened. Twilight should just say the beginning to jog Pinkie's memory and end with the cave and the love/friendship discovery. That part was boring to read.
I like this story though, can't wait to see what happens. :pinkiehappy:

1734117 I'll certainly consider it when i have the time. Thanks :twilightsmile:

First off, HUGE PINKIE FAN!:pinkiegasp: second, pinkie is best pony, why? BECAUSE SHE'S PINKIE PIE!!!...
5... wait, no, 3. I love all pinkie fabrics, if anyone has any recommendations let me know.
4. I don't judge but NO clopfics, (one of my good friends is a Cooper, and I admit I got a few boners reading molestia,) so don't think I'm judging them, I actually stand up for them.I've realized that clopping is very similar to regular fapping. In the show, ponies are the domonant species so basicly the equivilant to a human in their minds, now I'm also not saying that I think that cloppers have a mental disorder for those of you who who did this 2+2=-5%x8(9106÷6829)Π(7+2-83)√+(6x9)="42 fish" any way my point I'm trying to make here is I...HATE...SOURECROUT!!!... oh and don't send me.clopfics.
5. It makes me mad that I FELT like I Had to add that in fear people would judge me for judging, and that this will probobly still get bad comments for sticking up for clopers.
6. We as bronies should know by now not to judge a book by its cover. I mark, I get it, you enjoy the shows innocence and you hate how clopers take that away, but hating is not the answer. In the words of a fluttershy peace corps poster "violence will not save us"

Uuuugh! FANFICS, NPT FABRICS!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiesad2::flutterrage:
Buck auto correct!!!

So. In summery...:pinkiegasp::pinkieha::pinkiesmile: :ajbemused: :rainbowhuh::rainbowderp: :fluttercry: :moustache: :flutterrage: :applejackconfused: :twilightangry2::fluttercry::heart::yay::pinkiehappy:

So. In summery...:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile: :ajbemused: :rainbowhuh::rainbowderp: :fluttercry: :moustache: :flutterrage: :applejackconfused: :twilightangry2::fluttercry::heart::yay::pinkiehappy:

1last thing. this... /)^3^(\=:rainbowkiss: this is 20% moar awesome.

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