Our favorite cook becomes sick, and can't seem to get better. Is it just bad health or is there more to it? It's up to his friends and family to help him out.
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Mr Merritt
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Bon Bon is Twist's aunt.... Headcannon accepted.
Ah yeah, good to see Peppermill back around
Few notes:
1) several spelling errors
2) I assume this was one of those " I need to do this to get out of my writers block" things
3) seemed very rushed
4) good to see you're still alive
To Gordon Freeman: always nice to hear from a silent protagonist
To Ex-Nihilos: glad to hear it. And no hard feelings about not asking you to proofread. But frankly I decided to simply ignore the grammar nazis roaming FiMFiction.
Someguy: Are you sure you aren't trying to read AJ/Big mac's dialouge in an Appaloosan accent?
1674312 Dude no hard feelings at all, just glad to see you around again mate!
So Peppermill's at that age huh.
So I guess magic diseases can be just as contagious as the regular kind. The More You Know. And now Peppermill has essentially infected the entire unicorn population of Ponyville...
Oh boy. 
First of all, you better not be referencing Cupcakes on me.
Second of all, I am fascinated with your OC. You've done a great job with character development. Everything is so perfectly arranged and I can tell you spent awhile on this. This gets a like for now, but once finish, this could earn a spot in ye olde favorites folder.
1674312 twist has a lisp doesn't she so shouldn't the words have been altered a bit to look like you tried to get her to sound like she does?