My life was turned upside down after losing someone very close to me. But Fate, and a shy little filly from a land far away, decided that a lesson I had failed to learn once, I needed to learn again.
*Inspired by "My Little Dashie" written by ROBCakeran53.*
*Not the first Fluttershy-centered MLD clone. That honor goes to 'My Shy Little Friend"*
*Chapter 1 Edited*
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Could become great. I'm tracking.
this is getting good keep on writing :)
Mind you this is only the beginning.
How far will I take it?
Formatting needs to be cleaned up, particularly with dialogue and indentions. Commas are also overused (a problem of mine as well.). Otherwise, this is a good start to a meta tragedy fic and I look forward to seeing more.
Doing good so far.
Tracked.
FROST!
very nice. hoping to see more (a little sad. try making it a little bit more of a happy tone.)
Beautifully written, almost like you put in your own sense of loss form personal experience. It pulled at my heart strings.
But truthfully worth it, you are a good writer, and if you need a proof-reader I would be more than happy to help. 
Keep it up, you and so far only you have my undying support. 
"I will follow you to the end."
Please write more
... It is good.
Hang on 2 hearts stopping? I assume one is metaphorical as he would be dead otherwise?