I am MuffinDerp, (Female) I used to admin pages now i spend my time on league of legends. I will write when i can~ Im 16 i love drawing, writing, playing games and making my friend happy…etc.
A unicorn from Phillydelphia moves to Ponyville after she graduates college to get away from her old life and start a new life. She meets Pinkie Pie and befriends her; also befriending Rainbow Dash. She lives life on and tries to get her life in order. Only time will tell what happens.
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I don't think it would be possible to get a shittier cover pic. Not even this:
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I do like the drawing just... get a fucking scanner.
Wall of text. Ow. Please, use paragraphs.
Wall of text again.
PLEASE. HAVE YOU HEARD OF SOMETHING CALLED PARAGRAPHS?!
But on how well written it is when I exclude the wall of text, it's alright. I feel nice so I won't hit the dislike. I would have hit like if it wasn't a wall of text.
P.S: It's Fillydelphia.
i dont really have a problem with walls of text on this site
i just use the black background setting, makes it easier to focus
1636627 Haven't you ever thought that I am too poor for one? I would have one if my dad had a better job. But I will edit the picture so it looks better.
1636654 I will fix the spelling and I will separate it into paragraphs. I just don't use that style often.
1637628 Excellent. The top part just kinda killed it, and lined paper... ugh.
1638276 D:< FINE. I WILL RE-DRAW IT AND CROP IT SO IT IS ON WHITE PAPER AND NOT SHOWING THE TOP; DO YOU WANT IT COLORED?
1639510 Colored would be in your best interest, yes.
1639715 Then I will get right to that then :I
We appear to have an issue with a cover picture.
1692255 As it seems.
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But you do have a problem with the layout. Big walls of text. That does tend to scare away most people. All in all though, good job.
From what I have read of your story thus far, you are very descrptive. Unlike me, I guess.
1692303 I edited CH2 but I guess it didn't work have to re-edit it >.<
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Kay-O. You do that. I'm hitting some hay and catching some Zs. Feistly little creatures they are.