This is the story about a pony named Lightning Cloud. He only has few memories of his parents due to a fight against a horde of Griffons, but while he tries to enjoy the little things in life, a war is about to happen between ponies and griffons, will Lightning Cloud and his friends be able to help win this war...?
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Oh, so these are memories?
Holy shit man, the enter key is your friend.
1802028 thats is awesome
and yeah the part of th the griffon attacks is a memory he dreamed about the reason i started it like that is so it adds up to what happens later in the story
1802416 ya i know the spacing wasn't going right for me for some reason so either i was horribley wrong when spacing it or it was a bug I think that awnser #1 has a 99% of being right lol
This is going to be best story ever
One speaker per paragraph, maximum.
1808209 maybe for you but i've seen lot's of fics with more than one speaker in a paragraph
1808232 Fair enough. It's your story.
1824105 thank you i went through and edited mistakes, I'm glad for the chance and happy that you at least didn't make a gigantic deal like some of the haters out in life
amazing i like this one gunner
again gunner with waking up
Lookin' good Gunny