Oh boy this chapter took a lot longer to plan out then I had anticipated. That and I've been kind of distracted as of late. Sorry for the wait but hope you enjoy.
Chapter 12: Spike’s Condition and Celestia’s Order
Of course there was one creature in the library who took great pleasure at the revelation of what Spike turned out to be. Sparx was rolling on the floor in a massive fit of laughter, the high pitch kind that made everyone present focus their attention on and wondered if said dragonfly was going to hurt himself in his laughter induce state.
Eventually, the dragonfly managed to calm down enough that he was able to hover again and said in between bouts of giggles “Man Spyro I guess I have to apologize for all those times I called you fat considering that there’s another purple dragon who is clearly packing on the pounds.”
Of course that comment was met with mixed results but generally was in the negative side of things. Spike of course was feeling somewhat agitated by the off-hoof comment and his temper caused him to say “I’m not fat you talking bug.”
Sparx of course didn't respond to the challenge verbally. All he had to do was merely raise an eyebrow and glance at the slight but noticeable bulge around the young dragon’s stomach area to make his point across. The look seemed to also cause Spike’s annoyance to flair and he said “Maybe a demonstration of my dragon fire will teach you.”
Sparx of course developed a more challenging pose while Spyro and Cynder glanced at each other, once again thinking along the same lines. They both believed that if Spike had indeed discovered his element and said element was in a mature form; then it would at least give Spyro a basic idea of where to go in terms of training.
However, when Spike took an exaggerated breath and upon exhale form a tiny jet of green fire, those thoughts were quickly discarded. Sparx was in a state of immense glee as he returned to rolling along the floor in uncontrollable laughter. Such laughter was enough to crack the mask of toughness that Spike had tried to keep up and everyone present could see the watery liquid forming in his eyes.
Spyro gave a silent growl of annoyance and frustration and decided to take it out said frustration. With a solid smack of his left front paw, Sparx was propelled into the air in cone of earth energy. Spyro then focused his mana and said dragonfly now found he was trapped in a cage of high voltage electricity. Said orb was quickly brought over to Spyro and the adult purple dragon said in a commanding voice “That’s enough Sparx! I won’t have you insulting my student with you constant insults.”
“Wait…student?” Twilight asked her curiosity quickly in the forefront of her mind. Ever since the battle was over, she and the other elements had more or less the same question in their minds. Said question being what were Spyro and Cynder doing here since it was somewhat clear that they weren't from Equestria. Spyro slip of the tongue was enough of a clue that Twilight was quickly forming what could have only been the most logical conclusion and she couldn't resist blurting out “Are you saying you’re here to…”
“Train young Spike? The answer to that question my faithful student is yes.” The regal voice of Princess Celestia said as she stood outside the threshold to the library. Everypony and dragon turned their attention to her and all, minus Spyro and Cynder, quickly bowed. Celestia gave a warm smile and said in a casual voice “May I enter Twilight?”
Twilight quickly nodded her head and Celestia gave a quiet giggle before crossing the threshold and sitting in one of the cushions that dotted the floor. Conjuring up a cup of tea and taking a small sip, she eyed the still kneeling ponies and said “Please stand my little ponies. I was never one for ceremony and I think most of you would have gotten use to me by now.”
Everypony rose up and while they all moved to find a cushion to sit on, Spyro decided to lead the conversation as well as voice his major concern by saying “Celestia, while I did agree to help train young Spike here, I must point out that you aren't giving me a lot to work with here.” Spyro felt that it was slightly better than outright saying that Spike was underdeveloped as to try and avoid making it seem like it was his fault.
Celestia nodded her head in an understanding matter and replied “I understand that Spike is lacking in skills that you would deem important for a dragon to know, however he has a good head on his shoulders, is willing to learn, and is already able to summon his fire breath.”
“No he hasn't.” Cynder coldly remark. Although she spoke in a quiet tone, it was enough to bring the entire room into a deathly silent with ponies looking at her with various degrees of confusion on their faces.
Celestia was the only pony to remain unfazed by the remark but Cynder could tell that she was just as curious as the others from her eyes. Even though only being around these ponies for roughly a day, the dragoness had already gotten a good grasp on the body language and facial expression, one of few skills that she was proud of.
Cynder, knowing that she was going to be fighting an uphill battle, said “A dragon of his size and able to create a fire or any type of element of any degree is just not possible without some kind of magical interference.”
Celestia nodded and said “Yes, I did use a bit of magic to give Spike his fire breath. Is there some kind of problem with that? Surely it is wise for a dragon to unlock their fire as early as possible to allow them more time to learn how to control it.”
Celestia had sound logic…sound but flawed. Cynder shook her head in disagreement and replied “With all due respect Princess you’re wrong. While it might seem like a good idea, the truth in the matter is that such an action could have potential physical and psychological effects.”
The other ponies were now deeply interested and even Spike was somewhat curious as to where this conversation was going. They also had an underlying emotion of surprise by Cynder’s rather blunt comment on Celestia making a mistake. Cynder ignored the questioning stares and responded “Before a dragon becomes able to summon their element, their body has to have finished developing enough to be able to handle the pressure. There is also the fact that unlocking your element could be considered the dragon equivalent of reaching adolescence. By releasing said element prematurely, you run the chance of said dragon to begin their adolescence cycle of development before they had finished their child cycle of development. In terms of physical effects, the dragon could develop large eating habits, underdeveloped or lacking of important physical body parts like claws teeth horns or wings, and a much slower growth in both length and height. As far as mental problems, a dragon could fall into fits of attraction that border on obsession, periods of sudden and aggressive changes in behavior that manifest into unstoppable forms of greed or anger, and will be more likely developed a disconnection with his or her fellow dragonkin.”
Everypony, Celestia and Spike included, were startled by the almost word for word diagnostic of a dragon that had their fire magically active when compared to how it defined what made Spike act like the way he does. Spyro was also surprised but for a different reason and he whispered “How do you know so much about raising a youngling?”
Cynder gave a small playful smile and replied “partly due to instinct and the rest from a rather informative book.”
Celestia, after getting over her mild surprise, asked “Is it permanent?”
Cynder gave a mild shrug and replied “It varies really, from what I am able to understand; though in reality not a lot of parents do something like this so there aren't a lot of recorded cases.”
“Never the less Princess, we came here to do a job and by my ancestors I plan to see it through.” Spyro added, feeling a new sense of determination and drive surging within him. Cynder was also in agreement and she had a similar look in her eyes.
Celestia noticed this and gave a small smile in thanks before saying “This I leave this in your capable claws. I know you will do your best to bring out Spike’s full potential.” She paused for a moment and added “Why don’t you take Spike out for his first lesson while I talk with his caretaker.”
Spyro was momentarily put off-guard by the sudden request and while he did understand the need for the elements to be filled in, he wasn't exactly sure of what to do for a first lesson. Quickly shuffling through his memories of his own training, Spyro was able to pick one that wouldn't be too difficult and should serve as a way to establish an understanding of what Spike is like as a dragon without having to deal with the pressure of the ponies around him.
Spyro gave a slight nod in understanding before making his way towards the door with Cynder and the paralyzed Sparx following close behind. Spike took one glance at Celestia before giving a more hesitant nod and running to catch up with the two dragons.
Once the door was closed, Celestia turned to Big Mac and said “Why don’t you take these young fillies out for some treats?” Big Mac, having gotten use to his sister being one of the elements a long time ago, caught the hidden meaning behind the suggestion and quickly got the fillies out of the library in a mix of groan and sighs. Once the door had been closed for a second time, the princess of the sun returned her attention to the mares and said “Now I’m sure you all have many questions, most of them concerning Spyro and Cynder correct.”
The element nodded in agreement and after a brief moment of silent, Twilight was the first to ask “Where did they come from?”
Celestia looked off into the distance and said “A land that has seen much joy and pain in it time; A land that is filled with wonder but carries many scares…scares that even now are still healing and may even remain to serve as a reminder.” Celestia turned to look at them again and said “Such a land I nor any other pony has even been too. It is called by several names but the most common is Avalar.”
A few of the mares looked around in wonder and their mouths even moved as if to whisper the name. Another pause in the conversation and Applejack decided to ask “Okay, so it’s safe to assume that Spyro is going to be teaching young Spike correct?” Celestia nodded in agreement which gave the farm pony the signal to ask “So why them? I mean nothing against Spyro and Cynder but why those two and not one of the dragons here?”
On this question Celestia took a while to answer and the pause before her answer was enough to cause worry to grow in their hearts; unsure as to what kind of answer they might get. When Celestia did return her attention back on them, she said in a kind tone “What you ask me, I am sorry to say that I cannot answer right now. Not to leave you in the dark, but because you and Spike are not yet ready to handle such an answer.”
“Why not?!” Rainbow Dash retorted in mild anger which was quickly dissipated by the hard stare that Celestia was giving her.
Celestia took a small breath to calm her body and mind before she replied “Because that question is the root of many other questions…questions that, if unprepared to handle, could cause a rift not only in Equestria but in Avalar as well.” She took another breath and continued “What I can tell you is the same thing that I told to Ignitus and that Spyro was the only dragon capable to teaching Spike.”
“Who’s Ignitus?” Twilight asked as her mind tried to shuffle through all the names that she could remember but was unable to find it.
Celestia smile returned and she replied “He was once the guardian of fire but is now the new Chronicler of Avalar. It’s his job, from what I can remember, is to watch and record all the events that go on in Avalar; events ranging from the major to the everyday events of every sentient creature.” Celestia gave a small chuckle and said “You would have liked it Twilight, his library is probably bigger than the Canterlot Library.”
Twilight’s mouth hung open in disbelief as her mind tried to wrap around the concept of a place that was filled with knowledge on such a scale. It was enough to cause some drool to form on her lips before enough was created to start hanging off said lips.
While everypony gave a silent chuckle by Twilight’s self induce daydream; Rarity gave a gentle cough and said “Spyro must be pretty important in that world.”
Celestia turned her attention to the white unicorn and replied “You would be correct Rarity. Spyro and Cynder are considered heroes in Avalar.” She gave playful smile before adding “Fitting really considering what Spyro is.”
“Wha…what do you mean Princess?” Fluttershy asked is a hushed tone.
Celestia gave a calming smile to the pegasus which seemed to help a bit as she wasn't shaking as much and answered “Spyro’s purple scales are actually a very rare for a dragon.”
“How rare” Pinkie Pie asked
“Try once every ten generations.” Celestia responded and silently chuckle as she saw the shocked expressions of disbelief on their faces. Before they could recover, Celestia continued “It’s because of that rare scale color that marked Spyro to a destiny and an ability that no other dragon is capable of obtaining. Now what that destiny and ability is…well…that’s something you can ask him when you throw him your ‘Welcome to Ponyville Party’ right Pinkie Pie?”
Pinkie Pie, her eyes widening in shock at the realization, quickly grabbed all of her friends and rushed out the door towards SugarCube Corner leaving only a trail of dust behind. Celestia chuckled to herself before finishing the rest of her tea and softly whispering “I hope Spyro and Cynder can handle a Pinkie Pie Party.”
Man I apologize for the lateness of this chapter but I hope you all enjoy it.
yes new chapter
and first
they're fucked...
IT UPDATED!!!
ok, theres no 'e' in 'scars', the plural of 'scar'. 'scares' would be the plural of 'scare'. not a spelling mistake as its a real word. but it is the wrong word to use if im understanding ur context correctly
If they know what Spyro can do...poor Spike but yes Spike is a little bit fat :D
well, that certainly explains the greed growth. Nice job.
I haven't even read this yet and I know I'll love it. I fucking LOVE Spyro and his franchise (aside from Skylanders) and he was the first game I ever played back on the PSOne. As soon as I saw this story I knew I had to read it. Thank you for doing this crossover.
Good chapter and why did you unadd Pinkie's curoisity of Cynders past
RIGHT IN THE CHILDHOOD
Okay, time for Spike to find out how out of shape he really is as he fails to complete a simple exercise that wasn't very difficult for Spyro or Cynder.
And the Mane 6 get some hints about the past of our favorite pair of dragons. I just hope Fluttershy isn't too scared of them...
Prepare to be badged!
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Later!
2889942 Fuck, time to go try and climb that spinny vorteOH GOD MY CHILDHOOD!
2669967 spydr
what the fuck is it and does it involve Spyro...
IT DOES!
UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA UPDATE THE FREAKIN THING OEIJFULKHDFILUHJef/lkdnfk/jdehfh
Awwww you stopped at the good part
Hehe, I loved Sparx little roast of Spike, poor kid does need to work out though.
That explains a lot and looks like those two really got their work cut out for them.
I"M DYING OF SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
so it looks like everything the ponies did too help spike was backwards and risked leaving him a deformed maladjusted freak... I think they took that rather well.
Wow Cynder... way to hit the nail on the head there with a diagnosis.
I think Twilight and Cynder are going to have an argument in the future chapters...
Well this story is interesting and I haven't read any Spyro and MLP crossovers before, so I am interested in it. However, I am apprehensive of how this story will play out. This story is very very close to having an incurable case of crossoveritis.
What I mean by crossoveritis is you bring one or more main characters from a different story who are extremely powerful as they should be based on their universe's cannon. However instead of adapting the characters to meet the new world or adapting the new world to meet with them, you instead keep the crossover characters as strong as they are without any limitations at all and hit all of the ponies and Equestria with the idiot ball a thousand times each and make them seem extremely weak.
I know this story is more about Spike becoming a total awesome badass dragon instead of the mane six. However I don't think you need to more or less reduce half the mane six to little better than silly girls who seem to be completely obsessed with the male crossover character, especially Twilight Sparkle..
It seems way out of character for Twilight to just stare in awe while her home and friends are threatened by an unknown (to them) invading army, while the two dragons curb stomp such a massive force with complete ease.
Also it seems out of character that Celestia, wouldn't think dragons walking through the middle of Ponyville or anywhere in Equestria wouldn't cause problems. I am pretty sure she knew how much of a panic a dragon simply taking a nap in a mountain nearby gave the ponies of Ponyville. Crossovers do not mean the main pony characters have to act so out of character just to prove how awesome the hero or heroes from another world are.
I know they needed to have powerful scenes to show they are a great choice for training Spike to be a dragon, but it seemed a little excessively done here to me. I mean Spyro himself admitted the army was rather large. Yet he took out half of it in a matter of seconds, while Cynder took care of the other half.
The elements just gawked while this all happened, not seeming to even really understand or actually care that their home was in danger, and a couple of unknowns were doing all of the work to protect it. In such a situation I find it hard to believe the mane six, who have saved Ponyville multiple times already, wouldn't have broken from their stupor sooner than they did. This seems even more unlikely considering cannon-wise they have already faced and defeated Discord, since Spike's growth spurt happens in the middle of season two.
I still plan on keeping an eye on this story and reading it, unless I do finally believe it is a hopelessly incurable case of this crossoveritis. I like the idea of Spike learning what it is like to be a powerful dragon, so he can defend himself and help protect those he cares about. I think Spyro will be great for teaching him this once they figure out the whole student teacher thing with each other. I haven't read the last two current chapters so I don't know if this has been resolved already or not. I also want to see what Luna and Cynder, who are similar, end up being towards each other as well.
I am sorry if you feel this is a premature response to your story, but the issues I mentioned above were getting to me that much already. I really felt I had to say something.
Does Spike count about having purple(ish) scales?
3410391 I would leave if he does, and follow the author if he doesn't.
Just doesn't sit right.
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Wow Cynder, way to be a complete asshole, even though your previous experience does make you out to be a somewhat decent asshole. But still an asshole. We get it, Spike isn't where dragons should be, and no wonder, he's a BABY dragon, for starters. But damn, you needed to have a bit of tact about stuff like this. Yes, there are times where you have to be blunt and real, but in my opinion it doesn't seem to me that the first time she and Spyro see Spike would be an appropriate time to openly demean and belittle him. In essence, she's basically saying "You are a disgrace of a dragon, and probably we shouldn't even try, because you are already so fucked up in how you were raised that even with all the work we could have with you, ultimately it's gonna be pointless."
I'm pretty sure Spike has a crisis of confidence already, and is well known how he's different everypony else. The last thing he needs to have drilled into his impressionable head is thoughts that he is a mistake and an embarrassment to his species. As a matter of fact, I think Spyro should be the sole teacher--apparently everyone else isn't cut out for the job, and I think Spyro at least can make Spike feel better of his draconic traits rather than shun them.
Explaining time.
Lion.Fire.Lord.exe not responding to Cynder's logic and explanation. Please reboot.
I bet Spike is the offspring of a purple dragon from Avalar that was sent to Eques. There's a third purple dragon first there was Malefor, then there was Spyro, and now there's Spike.
scars... scars
So basically, every Spike episode up until Season 6 is indirectly Celestia's fault?