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Let the fury of hell be unleashed in Ancientwell.
I can't Help but think of the horrors the Captain has in store for gerald...also, my god that gerald thing is hilarious
Griffin shall become the Hidden. PaInT tHe WaLlS wItH tHeIr BlOoD!
3538360 Actually, that's not such a bad idea. I was looking for a way to give Griffin a house anyways... hmm. Equestrian betting pool?
My ax crazy senses are tingling Soon, the enemies of Griff will know only pain and tourment. Their existence will be that of a flowing river of blood as their rotting carcasses become nothing more then carelessly placed decorations within this garden of death.
Kick some ass Grid! Show em not to mess with the Griffin Pirates!
I require moooooooorrrrrrrreee!!!!!!!
To Gerald:
Through the earth’s cracks, fresh blood flows
as your reign soon draws to a close.
Fourteen throats, your men did slice
Now it is time to pay the price.
The reaper shall come to haunt this land
For your demise is soon at hand.
(sorry if this sucks, poetry isn't really my strong suit)
I made some minor edits to the chapter, mostly some spelling and grammar, but I also added a bit more description to the 'drink' Fia has. After all, it'll play an important part in the future.
In case nobody has made the connection yet, I'm going to spoil some things for you. Well, more like make some connections.
One, Dragon Blood holds magic in it. Actually, everything in this fictional world does, to some degree, but dragon blood has a high concentration.
Two, dragon blood tastes sour.
Three, when Griffin was suffering from magical diabetes, his subconscious told him he needed to drink the 'black sour liquid', through the medium of a DREAM.
Four, Fia drinks the 'black sour liquid'
Five, Fia's drink is not dragon blood, but water from 'the well'.
Six, Fia uses magic after drinking from the well.
Seven, The den's name is 'Ancientwell'.
Eight, ancient things are really old.
Nine, Ringringringringringringring, banana phone.
Ten, Hellfire is a gift only possessed by the descendants of the god of death.
Eleven, Fia uses hellfire.
Twelve, Griffin uses Hellfire.
Thirteen, a 'god like figure' saved Griffin using hellfire, when Malice attacked him in a DREAM.
Fourteen, Griffin was sent to Equestria by a 'god like figure'
Fifteen, Ding dong ding dong ding dong ding, banana phoooooooooone,
Sixteen, I really, and I mean REALLY, like fucking with my viewers, and was planning a lot of this back in the middle of Griffin the Griffin.
I hope that gives you some stuff to think about. Cue crazy conspiracy theory now!
Dis gonna be gud
3538846 It's really bad. No use of metaphor at all. It's direct dictation. Which, I suppose doesn't mean there's anything wrong with it, but it makes it rather bland and feels forced. The spice must flow not come out in chunky spurts.
3538902 <shrugs> meh, as I said, poetry isn't my strong suit.
Called the Tartarus fire.
3538856 Yeah, conspiracies ahoy! Woohoo!
You're doing great. I love this even more each time I look at it.
I also noticed you're taking elements from other canon stories. YAY! Black Water, Chrysalis reforming, etc....so excited.
3538963 Should also be noted that the last time I tried any form of poetry was for my English class in my sophomore year of high school (about 2-3 years ago), and even then I preferred haiku
And I thought last chapter's ending awoke anticipation...
Blackwing, you're amazing. I want to hug you.
...Strictly platonic affection, I assure you.
...Dunno how to end this, so, keep up the good work.
Very few fanfictions are amazing, and this is one that I could see hasbro making a cameo of in future seasons.
Ok
1. Huh so the sponsor of our favorite Griffin pirate is old Grim Mc Reaper eh? Figured he would be a Balance God
2. Why a balance God you ask? Well his completely unremarkable appearance was a clue for me, mainly because of balance being unremarkable. Unremarkable, not strong in any particular area but not weak in any either.
3. Sooooooooo ancient Dragon blood well eh? Oh boy oh boy a bit grim wouldn't you say? Grim but fucking baller as shit. Also don't let Griffin from that stuff, imagine if he drank like a GALLON of it., HA then he really would be a champion of death!
4. Hears banana phone ringing but as soon as I pick it up they hang up, Damn kids.
5. Strangely when I think of Griffin torturing Gerald and his ACEAITWSFD(Almost cartoonishly evil army if the weren't so fucking dark) I think of less blood and guts and more..... mental torture and complete sanity evisceration, also with twinkle twinkle little star from deadspace playing in the background
6. Despite what I just said im expecting him to use the CAWNEM (Cannon attack which name currently escapes me)
7. Banana phone rings again an once again as soon as I pick it up they hang up. Gettin real tired of your shit phone.
8. Would it be too much too ask if Via lives, I sorta enjoy her character, also Griffin will need it after his ah.....recent vacancies on his crew.
9. I eye banana phone waiting for it to ring, as soon as it rings I pick it up and say gotcha!
10. Ring ring banana phone mother Tucker
11. Blackwing!? You've been calling me?
12. Black wing hangs up
13. I sigh, phone rings again and I open up a portal to Tartarus and throw at Griffin 's head, who is apparently going to Tartarus for some reason, closes portal.
14. Eye begins to twitch, oh blackwing how I love you and despise you at the same time
Cue the Implacable man style revenge, as one by one the dogs start dropping.
Wait, I'm getting a "Hidden" vibe off this.
so did the fox drink dragon blood? or liquid gems? a gem cocktail?
GAH WHY YOU STOP THERE!!! THE CLIFF I WALKED OFF OF IT. MUST KNOW WHAT NEW BRAND OF KICKASS HAPPENEDS NEXT!!!
in other words my fellow gentleman, i am looking forward to your next chapter and hope to see it relatively soon.i hope you keep up the good work.
GODDAMN CLIFFHANGERS!!!
Side note: Infernus=Underworld/Tartarus
Show them the horrors of the Warp...
Can someone tell me on what chapter Griffin talked with chrysalis? I seam to have forgotten.
Please, for the love of god, Blood Eagle some bitches. It would be one of the scariest and most gruesome forms of Psychological Warfare besides grotesque mutilation. Hmm, maybe hang bits of body all around Ancientwell from multiple victims. Ah torture, how I love thou so.
I really hope this Gerald guy turns out to be the disgruntled mare from Wethoof that Griffin carved up a bit.
3539594 That was water from the river Styx from the Underworld. At least that's the only thing that fits the description and I'm sure the author will back me up on this one.
I'm sure just like drinking dragon's blood it has a drawback. It obviously has to if you're drinking from something that is as infamous as the river Styx. I also imagine it gives greater durability temporarily because one of the versions of Achilles legend was that he was dipped in the river Styx while held by one of his ankles. This gave him his near invulnerability, so I imagine drinking it could have a similar effect, but not as potent and would be temporary.
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Well since we're all making bets for something that will happen in the story here's my bet that is separate from the current one. Anyone is welcome to join me, and the author can't change the story because of the bet. It's something I'm sure he already has planned and has obviously been foreshadowed in this chapter.
My bet is that Fia will become an ally or join the crew. If you want to bet which one that's your choice, but technically she'll also be an ally if she join's the crew. So here are her options:
1. Join the crew.
2. Become an ally and stay to run Ancient Well.
3. Stays an enemy and runs away after Ancient Well is sacked/conquered or whatever.
4. Stays an enemy and becomes a prisoner.
5. She's killed.
I'm going to bet 150 bits for either option 1 or 2. 3 or 4 could easily transition into 1, 2 or even 5. As long as happens eventually you win the bet. Although to be fair the author may choose to kill her in 20 chapters so option 5 is only valid till the Ancient Well story arc is finished.
I look forward to the next chapter.
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So does that mean not everyone can use hellfire? Sounds like baseless conjecture to me. The most I would give you is that 'maybe' it's easier to control hellfire in the situation you've just painted, which is quite dangerous for the user. Otherwise I've seen no evidence to support the ramblings of inside a barely introduced character's mind. Especially since Griffin has not tried to teach anyone else the spell and we haven't seen others try to use it before. Obviously you might address this and if you do make it so that nobody else but special people can even hope to use it you must ask, "Does that make sense?" I know it's magic, but perhaps it's like if it was easier for a pegasus to do a wind spell than other species because their internal magic helps them control the weather, which makes sense.
On another note, based on your hints, does that mean a god of death sponsored him? I bet I know who it is! The most powerful death god of all, Ichigo.
(P.S. My opinion on hellfire is just that, my opinion! It does not reflect what the author wants to do and is in no way meant to offend anyone.)
If I'm right, then which incarnation are we talking about? Thanatos? Nito? Hades? An OC?
And then griffon goes all Dark Alessa on those dogs... *shudder*
3539810 I know how you feel dude or dudet
Wait a minute, can changelings turn into snakes and whatnot? I thought they were limited to ponies or species of similar physiology.
I wonder how bad they s*** themselfs after he says a spell to stop blood from going to there heart
I actually smiled at the end of this chapter.
Like a full on, evil smile.
What have you done to me, Blackwing?
3538856 Griffin is actually the Dragonborn, and Alduin is the god of death!
:D did I get it right?
3538794 Yes...perhaps...maybe...assets.diylol.com/hfs/5c5/e4a/b02/resized/zeus-meme-generator-happiness-or-misery-you-decide-1a8e11.jpg?1366315950.jpg ...but seriously...Go batshit crazy...secondimagination.files.wordpress.com/2013/09/2013-09-10-pb-meme-recreate-batshit.png?w=529&h=297
3540386 Dude and Cliffhangers are the spawn of Tartarus itself.
Shouldn't he be named Genald?
Oh...
and this:
3540270 Actually, it was made a point, albeit an easily missed one, back in GtG that Griffin tried teaching Gilda how to use the black flames, and she was unable to use it. Fia is also going to play a major part in events to come, and it will be explained just exactly how she knows what she does.
3538856 My guess is that one of the many Gods of Death brought Griffin to Equis, and that Fia is a demigod to a God of Death. Whether they are the same God, I couldn't figure it out with the hints you gave me, but it would be very interesting if they were different. It could evolve into something involving two Gods of Death fighting each other through Griffin and Fia.
3542108 .... I made a critical spelling error! Narcisisstic doesn't start with an R! WTF brain, you traitor. Changed Narcissistic to reject
As for some of the theories people came up with, the well is not a dragonblood well, Griffin has nothing to do with Alduin, who is not even in this story, and the 'god of death' is not so much a reaper, claimer of souls, or murderer, rather a guide, judge, and governor. In fact, I'm surprised you don't all know already, given MLP FiM's BLATANTLY greek mythos basis, (tartarus, the cerberus, just to name a few examples, RD's cutie mark is nearly identical, minus the colour scheme, to the mark of zeus that hercules wore in the disney film, canterlot, the city on a mountain which houses the gods, being a parody of Olympus, both pegasi, unicorns, and griffins being present, or playing rather specific roles in greek mythology) and the fact that the name of a particular god of death has been mentioned at least two dozen times. I'll just come out and say it. It's Hades. And the well draws from a river in the underworld.
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3542286. Well that explains why Malice was scared shitless of Griffins sponsor in that dream,....still I didn't think you'd go with the God of The Under world but I still fits given the things he has done(an I the hint and blatant statements you made are anything to go by, what he will do.) Also when Griffin is in Tartarous will Hades be the one to free him?
I have a feeling the cats and most of the crew are still alive, with Changeling spies in the ranks and illusion magic available to both crew and Changelings, not to mention Trixie and the other unicorns being taught not only Griff's magic, but also learning new uses for their own, pulling off the illusion of death and such wouldn't be too difficult to pull off, not to mention, they only need to fool that Gold Trim guy and whoever he's in cahoots with, I'm guessing that Fia there might have a hand or two with that there as well, hm...
3542229 Ah, ya it's hard to remember something you read over six months ago in great detail unless it felt important. Still, such limitations can be worked around. For example you could channel or invoke a death god's power, which is of course extremely dangerous if you don't know what you're doing.
Anyway, at least now we know what gift his patron gave him. Unless all humans have the capability? Probably not but who am I to say. Does that mean he could use death spells more easily and become a necromancer of sorts? I do remember him discussing Latin words for death and to never use them, like mortis. Doesn't mean he won't eventually. Considering all the implications you've implied it's a scary thought to think of a Griffin the Necromancer.
3542286 I was right it is the river Styx.
3543791 It is a river in the underworld, but it's not the Styx.
3543358 Who says griffin will be 'bound' in tartarus? He's going there, but that doesn't mean he'll be a prisoner.
3543883 I'd ask you to explain but I feel that will ruin it for me later so I will hold off on it, also I just remember something about swimming through seas of maggots that eat flesh so I assumed he was trapped, because you know I couldn't imagine people doing that for shits and giggles ya know?