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Sugar Rush


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Every decision is said to result in a new universe being created, a new reality where every possible option plays out. But what if the reality is a failure? Can changing the decision change it, or will it only mess it up further?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

Nice bit of work. I gave it a quick skim and it all looks nice. Take my like.

1502131 You. Say something relevant to the story, just don't spam a song on it.

Pretty well written, good descriptions. I think Chapters 1 and 2 could have been put together, they were both fairly short and not a big story transition took place between the two.

The creation of alternate universes/time lines is more complicated than that, but i can't argue over a fanfiction

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