1497920 "sanity" who needs it! we're all strange here
Lyra Heartstrings, Element of Loyalty; and Bon Bon, candy-mare
I don't know why but I love this line Poor Lyra for ever denied a threesome. RainbowDash, but what about Fluttershy!? heh funny though. Trixie's entire mental "thing" about making war on her hindquarters was funny in a really weird way. Twilight seriously hah! oh shipstease, that was mean.
…had she really just hallucinated the two of them assaulting her?
I was thinking wow this really is getting over the top, but NOPE, all just in her head. Man, if this is how bad Trixie's got it in just the first hour or so of the first day, I can't imagine the kind of wreck she'll be by the end of the week, but I'd expect something akin to full LESSON ZERO mode Twilight Sparkle.
(Also, we need a :crazytwilight: emote)
“I. Heard. ‘Threesome,’” Rainbow Dash noted.
Seems even in the Lunaverse Dash is the busiest mare in town... and with some kind of freaky threesomedar it might seem
Twilight didn’t seem to notice. “You’re a fraud!” she continued, nostrils flaring. “You don’t deserve to be the Element of Magic, you’ve squandered Princess Luna’s teachings, and I’ve spent the last few months building a case to prove this and gather my own…my…my own…”
Now that's some impressive awkward timing ... almost a shame we aren't exploring revers Twixie, but this was so much fun.
1498096 I have no idea. Again: these chapters are written in about an hour with only the barest of forethought and no concern for how the events in them might impact the larger world.
1498099 As stated in the description, no, it's not. I wouldn't do this to poor Trixie in canon; it's just a crack fic so that I can have fun with the characters without needing to worry about the world.
...Oh you mean Raindrops. Yeah, turns out she's out of town for the WHOLE weak. Had to help a certain strapping stallion hunt sum booties... er, bounties rather.
Someone bring Greengrass into this fic right away. Now is the perfect time for him to have his long awaited face off with his worthy political rival. Screw the waiting for Grand Galloping Gala... or rather lets get straight to the screwing right now.
Trixie's hallucination with Lyra and Bon-Bon was hilarious, as was the bath. Rainbow Dash getting in on a threesome is also amusing in a crack-fic sense.
But wait, you used Twilight! That means I must now draft an entire essay about how mangled she is here and why her characterization is so awful! This is gonna be good...
...
Okay, she's fine here. That last scene just about made the whole fic. I highly doubt you'll be able to top that. And I had my rage Avatar ready and everything...
Lyra being the Element of Loyalty????? o.O Huge fail, word of advice: don't use another pony's element other than that ONE pony. There's only one bearer of each Element of Harmony.
The story is definitely hilarious. Would love to see more
1498808 This is set in the Lunaverse, which is an alternate universe that I created and which eleven other authors have helped me expand. We've currently got about 20 completed stories set in it, and we're currently in the Top 25 largest groups on FiMFiction with, when last I checked, 354 members (placing us at #22 on that list). We're also the second-largest collaboritive universe group; we've outpaced both the PonyFall and Fallout: Equestria groups (and we left the Conversion Bureau in the dust awhile ago) and are inexorably closing in on the largest collabortive universe group, the Chess Game of the Gods group.
In the Lunaverse, Celestia went evil way back when and became Corona, the Tyrant Sun, before Princess Luna sealed her away in the sun for 1,000 years and ruled alone. When Corona escaped, Trixie, Luna's student, and six other mares became Elements: - Trixie is Element of Magic - Lyra is Element of Loyalty - Raindrops is Element of Honesty - Ditzy Doo is Element of Kindness - Carrot Top is Element of Generosity - Cheerilee is Element of Laughter.
The "original" Mane-6 are still around, but are largely background ponies, secondary characters, or, in the case of Twilight, an antagonist.
Note, though, that this story is not an "official" part of the Lunaverse. It's just a crack fic that I'm writing for fun.
Twilight, apparently, is hilarious in this universe. Silly pony should know better than to enter the bathroom unannounced regardless.
1498863 That explains a lot, but you're still missing a pretty damned important character. Where the heck is Spike in this universe? More significantly, why is he not about to become Trixie's boy toy?
1499463 Spike is with Zecora - who is with Corona. Much to Spike's consternation; unlike Zecora, he doesn't like Corona at all and would really rather get along with ponies.
Unfortunately, Corona doesn't give him much choice. She has a spell that makes him hulk out.
...
...oh, which reminds me, important distinction between the Mane universe and the Lunaverse: Unlike with Nightmare Moon, Corona managed to escape, and is an ongoing threat.
"Naturally, just as she had finished making the sign and found a nail to stick it into her door with, her front door opened, and two mares walked in: Lyra Heartstrings, Element of Loyalty; and Bon Bon, candy-mare. The two of them had been best friends all their lives and a couple pretty much since they had been old enough to fully understand the concept." Hang on. I thought dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rainbow_Dash.png was the Element of Loyalty?
EDIT: Okay. I think I get it now. The elements have been changed to other ponies.
That bit with Twilight is too funny. I do think it's odd that she teleported straight into her bathroom, clearly I need to read some of these other stories you mention to see if I can make out why she'd be so "BAM! I'm in your house, what do you have to say about that?!" to Trixie. I almost expected and still kinda expect Twixie (by the way that's probably the worst accidental conjunction to shorten a shipping title ever) to happen.
This is my first time reading a story from the Lunaverse (shocking seeing how Luna is my #1 favorite pony), but I'm really enjoying this. But there was one thing that irked me.
Trixie Lulamoon!” A high, bedraggled voice cried as Trixie shrieked in surprise at the invasion to her privacy, this time an actual invasion, too, rather than Trixie simply forgetting about Pokey being in her office. The mare that arrived was purple-coated and black-maned, though her mane had a purple and pink stripe in them. She was wearing a brown cloak (or a potato sack; Trixie couldn’t tell) and had a cutie mark of a six-pointed star surrounded by other stars…
Really? Did you have to imply that Twilight might be a homeless Trixie? I hate that fandom's Homeless Trixie persona. I mean, it's not like Ponyville is a huge town. I'm not even sure how gossip can go as far from Ponyville to Manehatten (referring to Homeless Trixie fandom how her career went into shambles because of rumor spreads from Ponyville to everywhere in a matter of a few days). In the Lunaverse Trixie might not be homeless, but that doesn't mean you have to put Twilight under that position.
On the brightside, I really like this story. I think I might even read the other Lunaverse fics.
Just as a quick reminder, these chapters are all being written in about an hour, with no attempts at editing.
Or sanity.
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"sanity"
who needs it! we're all strange here
I don't know why but I love this line
Poor Lyra for ever denied a threesome. RainbowDash, but what about Fluttershy!? heh funny though.
Trixie's entire mental "thing" about making war on her hindquarters was funny in a really weird way.
Twilight seriously hah! oh shipstease, that was mean.
Rainbow like.
Also, Twi was hilarious.
... That is all.
1497920 WHO NEEDS SANITY!!
Bring in the Flutterheat!
(Fluttershy in heat)
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That had me on the floor. Seriously.
Aw, everypony is making this harder on Trixie.
CONTINUE.
Also, not sure why I didn't favorite this before. I must be losing my own sanity.
I was thinking wow this really is getting over the top, but NOPE, all just in her head. Man, if this is how bad Trixie's got it in just the first hour or so of the first day, I can't imagine the kind of wreck she'll be by the end of the week, but I'd expect something akin to full LESSON ZERO mode Twilight Sparkle.
(Also, we need a :crazytwilight: emote)
Seems even in the Lunaverse Dash is the busiest mare in town... and with some kind of freaky threesomedar it might seem
Now that's some impressive awkward timing ... almost a shame we aren't exploring revers Twixie, but this was so much fun.
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I agree; sanity is so overrated! Also...
Just wait until we gett to Raindrops, than your suffering will truly begin.
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Noooo! not suffering, I can't stand suffering
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There are zero garuntees that she won't be back.
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1498081 Yyezzz!
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Double the above.
Is... is this in Lunaverse!canon? I feel like it isn't. Either way, the whole Twilight thing had me literally laughing out loud. Well done, sir.
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Cool song, I shall play when RD shows up, if we get that lucky
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Cool pic
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It's a crack fic not part of canon, but just as fun
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I have no idea. Again: these chapters are written in about an hour with only the barest of forethought and no concern for how the events in them might impact the larger world.
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As stated in the description, no, it's not. I wouldn't do this to poor Trixie in canon; it's just a crack fic so that I can have fun with the characters without needing to worry about the world.
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Rainbow Dash already showed up...
...
...Oh you mean Raindrops. Yeah, turns out she's out of town for the WHOLE weak. Had to help a certain strapping stallion hunt sum booties... er, bounties rather.
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"I will destroy you!"
seriously don't joke, or someone will have to bring GG into this
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YES... YES!!!
Someone bring Greengrass into this fic right away. Now is the perfect time for him to have his long awaited face off with his worthy political rival. Screw the waiting for Grand Galloping Gala... or rather lets get straight to the screwing right now.
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"State to screwing"
I'm not even sure I wanna know what that is
Twilight's sudden appearence and their exchange afterwards completely made my day
Hmm. Note to self: "threesome" is to Rainbow Dash as "Shazam" is to Captain Marvel. Handy for future reference.
Oh, poor Twilight. Swapping destinies rarely ends well for both parties.
Trixie's hallucination with Lyra and Bon-Bon was hilarious, as was the bath. Rainbow Dash getting in on a threesome is also amusing in a crack-fic sense.
But wait, you used Twilight! That means I must now draft an entire essay about how mangled she is here and why her characterization is so awful! This is gonna be good...
...
Okay, she's fine here. That last scene just about made the whole fic. I highly doubt you'll be able to top that. And I had my rage Avatar ready and everything...
Threesome senses tingling...
Twilight!
Lyra being the Element of Loyalty????? o.O Huge fail, word of advice: don't use another pony's element other than that ONE pony. There's only one bearer of each Element of Harmony.
The story is definitely hilarious. Would love to see more
Oh lol I see now. Never read this kind of story, sooo my bad
.....you keep giving me ideas.....
glorious glorious ideas.......
God, I love this story. It's just so hysterical and sexy and funny and sexy.
And every day, I am more and more glad I put that scene in The Night After.
So so happy I did that.
Poor Trixie....having said that...
1498146 would that be california?
Rainbow Dash and not Cloud Kicker? She's going to be miffed....
Broken faucet? Oooo, she needs to call a plumber now.
Maybe next her front window should break...
Stupid Sexy Twilight. XD
Waited EONS to have a reason to write that. Also, Rainbow Dash in Bon-Bon and Lyra sandwich? AWESOME.
Wait, what?
Why is Lyra the Element of Loyalty?
And Trixie the Element of Magic?
1498808
This is set in the Lunaverse, which is an alternate universe that I created and which eleven other authors have helped me expand. We've currently got about 20 completed stories set in it, and we're currently in the Top 25 largest groups on FiMFiction with, when last I checked, 354 members (placing us at #22 on that list). We're also the second-largest collaboritive universe group; we've outpaced both the PonyFall and Fallout: Equestria groups (and we left the Conversion Bureau in the dust awhile ago) and are inexorably closing in on the largest collabortive universe group, the Chess Game of the Gods group.
In the Lunaverse, Celestia went evil way back when and became Corona, the Tyrant Sun, before Princess Luna sealed her away in the sun for 1,000 years and ruled alone. When Corona escaped, Trixie, Luna's student, and six other mares became Elements:
- Trixie is Element of Magic
- Lyra is Element of Loyalty
- Raindrops is Element of Honesty
- Ditzy Doo is Element of Kindness
- Carrot Top is Element of Generosity
- Cheerilee is Element of Laughter.
The "original" Mane-6 are still around, but are largely background ponies, secondary characters, or, in the case of Twilight, an antagonist.
Note, though, that this story is not an "official" part of the Lunaverse. It's just a crack fic that I'm writing for fun.
Well, this is fun. :)
1498863 Ah, I see. My apologies for only skimming it in the description.
Bwah hah hah! XD
Twilight, apparently, is hilarious in this universe. Silly pony should know better than to enter the bathroom unannounced regardless.
1498863 That explains a lot, but you're still missing a pretty damned important character. Where the heck is Spike in this universe? More significantly, why is he not about to become Trixie's boy toy?
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Bit late for this to be timely, but:
http://mylittlefacewhen.com/f/3912/
I don't like clops fics. Closest I'll get to liking one is Beating the Heat. This. This is comparable to Beating the Heat.
Sir, I salute you to making a semi-clop fic I enjoy! Carry on!
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Spike is with Zecora - who is with Corona. Much to Spike's consternation; unlike Zecora, he doesn't like Corona at all and would really rather get along with ponies.
Unfortunately, Corona doesn't give him much choice. She has a spell that makes him hulk out.
...
...oh, which reminds me, important distinction between the Mane universe and the Lunaverse: Unlike with Nightmare Moon, Corona managed to escape, and is an ongoing threat.
1499995 why isn't Trixie using spike to speak with Luna unless Trixie never hatched him (making him a dead egg) or he died since he was hatched.
This looks like it might shape up to be rather funny. I might have to run away if it goes full-on clop, but in the meantime, silliness ho!
"Naturally, just as she had finished making the sign and found a nail to stick it into her door with, her front door opened, and two mares walked in: Lyra Heartstrings, Element of Loyalty; and Bon Bon, candy-mare. The two of them had been best friends all their lives and a couple pretty much since they had been old enough to fully understand the concept."
Hang on. I thought dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rainbow_Dash.png was the Element of Loyalty?
EDIT: Okay. I think I get it now. The elements have been changed to other ponies.
*Sigh* I think trixie just missed something important with that last flash. Still not too keen on her predicament, crack or not.
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heh no clue I'm afraid
I died when Twilight changed her position. Good work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
That bit with Twilight is too funny. I do think it's odd that she teleported straight into her bathroom, clearly I need to read some of these other stories you mention to see if I can make out why she'd be so "BAM! I'm in your house, what do you have to say about that?!" to Trixie. I almost expected and still kinda expect Twixie (by the way that's probably the worst accidental conjunction to shorten a shipping title ever) to happen.
This is my first time reading a story from the Lunaverse (shocking seeing how Luna is my #1 favorite pony), but I'm really enjoying this. But there was one thing that irked me.
Really? Did you have to imply that Twilight might be a homeless Trixie? I hate that fandom's Homeless Trixie persona. I mean, it's not like Ponyville is a huge town. I'm not even sure how gossip can go as far from Ponyville to Manehatten (referring to Homeless Trixie fandom how her career went into shambles because of rumor spreads from Ponyville to everywhere in a matter of a few days). In the Lunaverse Trixie might not be homeless, but that doesn't mean you have to put Twilight under that position.
On the brightside, I really like this story. I think I might even read the other Lunaverse fics.