• Published 26th Oct 2012
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This Is What Happens When I Ponify My Dreams And Post Them Online - Peppermint Cream



I find that I have some crazy dreams and I thought I'd ponify them from now on and post them.

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Sunday 21st October Pt2

IMPORTANT NOTE
From here on, my dream was ponified already.


Everything is dark and quiet. I can hear faint yet familiar voices, they sound fearful. There's a long ringing noise as well. As I stare around at the darkness that stretched for miles, a white light started to fade into appearance. It filled me with warmth and joy and I wanted to go to it so desperately. When I found the strength to get up, I started to make my way over to the welcoming light. The light seemed to fade away again as I got closer. All that joy and warmth was washed away and I was left to be cold again. The dark haze seemed to lift as the world became brighter again, the ringing noise stopped and the voices became clearer. I recognize some of the voices now although my vision is blurry so I can't make out any faces.

"She's alive! H-honey, she's alive!"

"Brilliant, we can't risk losing a member of the alicorn race." That voice was definitely my mother's, only she would say I'm an alicorn.

"Go and sit down Mrs.Catcher."

"That's Princess Haze to you!"

"Honey, listen to the doctor."

I blink a few times to make my sight clearer. My dad is next to me, holding my hoof. Nightsong is asleep in the corner while Stardust is trying to wake her up.

"D-dad?"

"Yes Thunder?" He looked depressed and worried. I looked around at the other ponies facial expressions and none of them showed the same. Stardust was excited about me "waking up", she didn't really get the concept of dying. My mum looked proud although I wasn't quite sure why. Nightsong hadn't woken up yet so I'm guessing she put herself to sleep with magic as opposed to being tired.

"What happened? I remember being in Sonic Moves and attempting to find my signature move but I don't remember anything after that."

"You lost focus while trying to pull it off and you were flung back all the way down to Ponyville. You're quite lucky that Miss.Dash here was fast enough to catch you just before you hit the ground." I was suddenly aware that Coach Dash was on the other side of my bed.

"Yes, but you still took some damage when you landed on my back, albeit less than you would've if you hit the ground."

"Thanks Coach Dash."

"You can call me RD, and hey, it's no problem for the Element of Loyalty, fastest flier in all of Equestria!" She always had a big ego. I still wonder why she quit the Wonderbolts a month after she joined.

"Excuse me, I'm sorry to break this up but Thunderheart has some other visitors so you're going to have to leave so that they can come in." The doctor that was looking after me had a really dull voice. Nightsong's horn flared and she awoke. My family and Rainbow Dash filtered out of the hospital room and two familiar pegasi came in.

"Cloud Dasher, Storm Twirl!" I tried to get up to hug them but all that did was send a sharp pain through my back and send me back down.

"Doctor! I think there's something wrong!" Storm Twirl always worried over the slightest thing. All I did was try and get up, so what if I failed and fell back down?

"What is it Miss.Twirl?" He looked bored as if he knew there wouldn't be a serious issue.

"She got up to try and hug us when we came in but she winced and fell back down."

"Thunderheart, you need to stay down. The reason you felt that pain was because you landed on your back, that soreness should go away overnight. You may also feel slightly stiff when you get up tomorrow because you've been inactive for a while."

"Doctor, how long have I been out?"

"Two weeks, so you're mostly healed. You'll be allowed out tomorrow."

"Thank you."

"How's flight school been, you guys?"

"Dull without you." Aw, my friends are so sweet!

"Has anypony pulled off a sonic move yet?"

"No, but Lightning Flicker is getting close. He says he's gonna call it 'The Flicker'. How unoriginal." Cloud Dasher always hated Lightning after what he did. Telling someone's biggest secret isn't exactly the best way to treat your best friend. I managed to save Cloud Dasher's popularity by asking him to be my friend, I wasn't going to let him be shunned and hated on just for being an orphan!

"I know right! He's so full of himself too." Storm Twirl was a sparky Pegasus, always trying to make people laugh, but she was a bit of a backstabber sometimes.

"Um, Thunder, you might wanna hear the rumors that Lightning has been spreading about you..."

"Just what has he been saying?"
"That you two are going out and that you let him rut you."

"What was that, Dasher?"

"You let him rut you..." Cloud Dasher was still quiet but I heard him that time.


"THAT LYING SON OF A BITCH!" I spread my wings and leapt into the air. The pain in my back was just a distraction compared to the burning rage I felt now. I flew through the corridors of the hospital until reached the end. The receptionist was yelling at me, telling me to come back. I exited the hospital and rose up above upper Cloudsdale, then I turned and began my descent to Cloudsdale Flight Academy. My eyes were watering and my whole body was strained as I got faster and faster. Wispy vapor began to collect in a cone around me and I immediately realised what was happening. I pushed harder, I was not about to fail again, there was nobody here to save me this time. A deafening crack sounded and all the pressure on my body was released. I looked behind and saw a heart shaped ring of light glowing a fiery red. There was a purple trail following me as I neared the soft cloud floor of the academy.

Several ponies came rushing up to me as I swiftly landed but I ignored them and kept walking. After a few minutes, I found my target.

"YOU!" Lightning Flicker looked nervous and I couldn't blame him. I'd be nervous if a raging pony that had just pulled of a sonic move was approaching me.

"Uh...hi?"

"HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT! I HATE YOU, WHY WOULD I DO IT WITH A PONY I DESPISE?!"

"I swear, I didn't say anything of the sort! I don't know who told you I said that but they can't be a very reliable source!" One of Lightning's stupid friends walked up to him.

"Wait, so she didn't let you?"

"Aha! So not only did you spread that rumor, you lied to me as well!" Satisfied that I'd dealt with him, I turned and walked away. I looked back to see his reaction and saw that he was staring at my ass, his wings spread out. I laughed and flew off.

Comments ( 7 )

1529590 I edited it to make more sense. Well... slightly more sense.

1529605

well, what the hell happend in your real dream then?XD I assume you take the concept of your dream and kinda make a story around it in pony style right? Also this chapter didn't make too much sense to me but hey I'ts past midnight(here) who gives a fuck?XD

Keep up the good work

1552033 Have I mentioned that I don't make sense?

1554633 Thats nice to hear ^^ I also don't make sense ^^

Is chu writing more...?

It's been a while now.. :applejackunsure:

1634090 heheh I've been busy with school and helping my mum plan her wedding. She's getting married in 13 1/2 hours :pinkiesmile:

1634374 Congratulations for you and your mom :pinkiesmile: 2 hours to go!

But hurry up with the next chapter. I'm begining to go crazy.. :pinkiecrazy:

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