It's humanized pony time! Tori (Twilight) has just transferred to a brand new school and is already struggling to fit in. What will she do when she meets the rest of the Mane Six? (I'm horrible with descriptions, but I guarantee that you will enjoy it.)
I have a thing for humanized ponies, for sure. Haha. This is pretty awesome. Keep up the great work.
Very nice;I like these kind of stories! Hope you update soon!
this is want started me with fanfic on ED but now i can track it thanks so much for getting into fanfiction
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R-really?! I'm so happy that you liked it so much!
hoh my gawd this is awesome
waitwaitwait
it has a romance tag
wonder where this is going
25 bucks says it's 'Tori' and Dash
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i can see that happening
over 500 words 0_0........I'm enjoying this already
102485 fifty says it's,dash and jack
I was going to suggest that you make Zecora a chemistry teacher, but the way you have everything set up, it seems like the main characters only have one teacher for everything.
Also, I wonder if you could give Discord an appearance, assuming your story provides room for someone like him.
dash and tori
please do it
do iiiitttt
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Discord can be like he was but something like taking over the school maybe instand of a whole town maybe
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but story i guess make little scenes with the main 6 (thier not ponies so no mane) get along with tori
Really liking the story so far looking forward to the next chapter and seeing more shenanigans
Why not have Pip show up as one of Spike's classmates?
This chapter was good.
I wonder if Tori will actually ask Dash why she hit on her if she had Gilda...
taking requests for oc eh?
double tune a male musicians
Was that still there?! I need to remove that
Thanks for another chapter Æther, very much appreciate it!!! Chapter was good IMO, managed to get the spirit of the episode. Although still unsure as to how I felt about Dash x Gilda Spun me out a bit.
Looking forward to seeing Trixie as a recurring character and drop the CMC's in Spike's classes. And make the teacher Mr Hooves, a teacher who has his Doctorate in Physics. Just do a filler ep about Spike/CMC's every now and again ^^,
Not that I'm telling you how to write your fanfic though
really hope for more
113708 i am silly pony then
I forgot to track this and went mental until I saw somebodys comment on their profile then I was like
103075 ^agreed
120232 You'll find out...Mwa Ha Ha :P
dude i know you wont be doing any doctor who (whooves?) centric stuff but if you have seen Human Nature/ The Family of Blood/ School Reunion you could give a shout out to any one of the episodes and see if anyone notices, or not its your story anyway keep up the good work
120342 Your picture is absolutely adorable!
136514 Not my pic. I wish I could draw that good...Forgot where the source was from, but it's not mine.
how bout derpy? I have a friend whose eyes are all like so you could actually have derpy being human and all that
I hope you don't forget about the people who read this on EQ we submitted OC ponies in the comments there, but it's been so long that I don't even think it's relevent anymore...
Phoebe? More like Phobia... Lol.
No....update... UNCLE ICE IS PISSED
This is epic! I'm tracking reading and favoriting (Not even a word)
170638 I'm Sorrryyy!!!! School's been taking a lot of time ;A;
103516 yes I agree yes do it Aether do it
171032 I know what you mean man. I've got thirteen tests five reports and one talk all within three weeks coming up.
cool
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I think it's probably Phoebe and Dash.
Glad to see this was updated. And don't worry about delaying it. Most, if not all of us, are patient enough.
I'm gonna he the first to say it: APPLEDASH!
179882 Somepony beat you to it, brony...sorry
103275 id really see Zecora more has a guidance councilor than a teacher really
and Discord could be more like a rich businessman who wants to take out the track/sports fields of the school to build a strip mall or some such
Don't rush on our part, take your time. These are great!
180190 That too. It's ultimately up to the author though. We'll see soon enough.
Who is David!!1 I can't think of what pony he is, that is to say he is one in the show. Anyways, great story and hope you update soon.
I'm guessing that David might be related to a Doctor?
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Yes but the real question is, Doctor who?
David Tennant-The Doctor.
David David, the David.
Is he... prince blueblood?
PinkieDash? I was hoping for TwiDash.