I made a bet with my best friend that I would go up to the fabled mansion in the Everfree Forest, and I would find nothing in there, thus proving his story wrong. I now know that I should never make bets that I can't win, and visits places that would scar me emotionally and psychologically.
This is my entry for the Nightmare Night fanfic contest, held by Equestria Daily.
This was pretty good. I did not notice any perceivable errors, and the pacing did not feel rushed.
It felt like a chapter from a Stephen King or Dean Koontz novel.
It has earned an upvote and a fave from me.
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Thanks! It's a good feeling to be compared to Stephen King as he is one of my favorite writers.