scootaloo has been sending rainbowdash letters that seem to not be read
(story is based around rainbowdash being in the wonderbolts and scootaloo sending her letters)
scootaloo has been sending rainbowdash letters that seem to not be read
(story is based around rainbowdash being in the wonderbolts and scootaloo sending her letters)
Who ever knows what this story is based on then you are boss
Instant fave <3
Not to beat you down but you have Scootaloo's letters sound like she's talking like Applejack/bloom.
That's the wrong word, Idol as in a person or persons one looks up to not idle as in an idle car
This could use a period.
Another Period here please.
And another period.
Implying that a pony could even see a tattoo under all that fur.
The plural of pony is Ponies, and the growin part makes her sound uneducated.
It's Sweetie Belle.
I'm sure this was just a slip of the fingers :P
Sorry for pointing out all these mistakes and i'm sure I missed quite a few more. Over all I want to know what was keeping Dash from reading much less sending a reply.
eh it's not really "based" of anything. It feels like you just copied Stan into a word doc and added ponies, and to be honest you took scootaloo completely out of character in your writing.
Writing: For a ripoff of a rap song, but sometimes the rhyme isn't there, or it's just bad.
Formatting: It's okay, but there should be a little more space between the different letters.
Overall: meh 3/10 for just ponifying Stan with out of character scootaloo. It felt forced.
My tea's gone cold I'm wandering why
But I don't mind at all
The morning rain clouds up my window
And I cant see at all
Even if I could it'd all be grey
But your picture on my wall
It reminds me that it's not so bad
It's not so bad
Rainbow87dash just for knowing those lyrics I love you
And... you took it to Eminem.