"C'mon! It'll be fun!"
"I mean- Are we really sure we should be headin' into the Everfree forest?"
"Yeah... Rarity told me to not go snooping around places like that..."
"Oh come on! Don't be a bunch of chickens! It'll be fun! And plus, we could even get a cutie mark in archaeology maybe!"
"What's Ar...charcoal or, whatever the hays that name."
"The study of cool castles full of mysterious secrets, like Daring Do does in her book: Daring Do and the Secret of the Sphinx!"
"Right."
"I mean, sure, if we can do anythin' to get our cutie marks faster, I'm in!"
"CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS ARCHAEOLOGISTS!"
A short story made for the dialogue only contest. I had fun making this, and I think it turned out well.
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i wish there was some sort of color coding or any way of knowing who was saying what, but other than that and some confusion that I had while reading, I really liked it.
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Color coding is not allowed as per contest rules. But I tried to make the dialogue the least confusing I could, by using formatting and the character's locations and speech patterns/quirks to differentiate them from one another
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Oh, gotcha. I didn't know what the rules were since I don't really write, that makes sense then.
Smart idea putting them in a dark room at the castle.