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Equestrian Portals - sweetiepie19

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Equestrian Portals

Equestian Portals

Chapter 1 – The Crash
It was a bright sunny day and Twilight Sparkle was walking home to her library from Sweet Apple Acres ,until suddenly a giant rainbow flew across the sky .It was Rainbow Dash but, there was something fishy going on with the cyan Pegasus was doing. Then out of the sunny blue sky flew a rocket, it was going very fast and soon it crashed into Everfree Forest. Hopefully Zecora was okay because her home was where the rocket landed. So Twilight trotted as fast as she could to Zecora’s house. There Came Zecora screaming “Beware you pony folk there is an alien upon us!’’ Twilight just shrugged and went on into the forest and braced herself for what would come next.


Chapter 2 – The Alien Figure

The spaceship steamed with fog and a coughing pony figure with a unicorn horn stepped out of the ship. She had a white body a cutie mark and a mane and tail with black streaks through the flowing strands of hair. The pony said ‘’Wheatley hello Wheatley oh where could that stubborn core be?’’ Twilight tried to talk to her but the pony just growled and one weird looking robot came out with an oval body and pointy legs. Twilight ran away but all of a sudden a cloud of blue smoke circled her but she knew she was being transported but what pony would want to see her at this moment she thought. Finally Twilight ended up in Princess Celestias castle ‘’Princess Celestia ‘’ Twilight said , why do you need me ? Luna was at her side and she said ‘’hello great and powerful Twilight ‘’ we need you here because you need these. I n awe Twilight saw a whole utility closet of weapons that looked very futuristic and she knew these were special.
Chapter 3 – The Portal Gun
Luna spoke again she said’’ This weapon is very powerful, it is a portal gun. I got it from when I was banished to the moon I seen that a space craft was launched from an almost pointy building on earth that had a name like Aperture Science Laboratories the gun landed on the moon with me .While I was Nightmare Moon I hid the gun safely in my own room in the castle when Celestia wasn’t looking and you six helped me become this she said. I will give you a lesson on the gun really quick bla bla bla bla gun bla portal, and that’s using a portal gun in a nutshell. ’Celestia said ‘’I already contacted your friends along with a pony named Derpy Hooves to help you fight the so called pony named GlaDOs .’’Thank you’’ Twilight said as she put the gun on her horn and shot a portal down to the mayors house and was off to save all of Equestria


Chapter 4 – The War
When Twilight got There all of her friends were waiting Rarity ,Applejack ,Rainbow Dash ,Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, and Derpy Hooves .Rarity and all her friends said lets kick some turret butt!!!! Twilight was up in front by GlaDOs with a mad look on her face at GlaDOs .The pony’s had tons of turrets surrounding them but Twilight just bucked them out of the way. Rarity tossed gems, AJ apples,rd lightning, pinkie pie cakes and pies which the enemy pony just ate and sighed. Little did GlaDOs know but behind the seven friends was Luna with a moonlight scepter that would banish her to Solitary Confinement. So what Twilight did was distract the unicorn and when GlaDOs was distracted Luna aims her scepter at her and banished GlaDOS to Solitary Confinement. When all of the war was over Pinkie Pie threw a party for the towns freedom and every pony was invited. Then Pinkie jumped up and said ‘’don’t you just love happy endings!!!!
Chapter 5 – Epilogue
One year after GlaDOs was sent to the castles Solitary Confinement for learning to be nice .Her fellow pony friends like,Cheriliee ,Snowcatcher ,Honeybuzz,Feathermay,Lillyblossom,Dj pon3,Octivia,SweetieSwirl,Fizzypop,TwinkleshineLululuck,and Berrypunch have found a new kind of Elements called the Ponyodic table of elements also found in an old castles ruins and GlaDOs has learned how to harness her power along with her friends and have plenty of adventures with her new pony friends.

Comments ( 36 )

masterpiece

thank you oh thank you i worked verry hard i wrote the whole thing on paper last night yes last night!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::twilightblush:

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That's great! I love it when people really work hard for something they love. Not enough of that these days- all these half-assed crossovers, but yours was perfect! :scootangel:

oh yay this is my first and ever first pony fanfic ever!!!!!!!:pinkiesmile: yes really:trollestia:

oh yay this is my first and ever first pony fanfic ever!!!!!!!:pinkiesmile: yes really:trollestia::moustache:

please dont comment very meanly it could make me stop writing stories!!!!:pinkiegasp::fluttercry::applecry::fluttershbad::ajsleepy::twilightoops::raritycry::trixieshiftright:

too short
but still good

oh thank you and like this is my first story so sorry if it has mistakes i hate typing stuff:eeyup::ajbemused:

the extra ponys at the end are some of my mlp basic ones i have alot of ponies even if my room is crowded!:eeyup::coolphoto::trixieshiftright:

We need a sequel!

Perfect.
Absolutely perfect.

whats up with the whole spam thing not being mean?:applejackunsure::twilightblush:

You win sir 5 stars and a very sick pinkie:pinkiesick:

my pic wont move:pinkiegasp::raritydespair:

some pony have a comment on here!!!:fluttercry::raritydespair::twilightangry2::rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::fluttershbad::ajsleepy::applecry::eeyup::duck:

You did it! you saved the art of the crossover. now we need a longer sequel.

try to put more detail in your next fic's:rainbowhuh:

ohhhh thank you yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::twilightblush::yay::scootangel::twilightsmile::raritywink::duck::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

this makes me very happy!!!!!:pinkiesad2::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::raritywink::raritystarry::twilightblush::yay::scootangel::ajsmug:

ill try harder!!1:pinkiehappy: next time:eeyup:

ohhh pretty pic

omg omg !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its on youtube (squeal) hahaha yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!11:applejackconfused::heart::pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::raritystarry::raritystarry::duck::twilightsheepish::twilightblush::yay::moustache::eeyup::scootangel::derpytongue2::derpyderp2::ajsmug::derpyderp1::coolphoto::rainbowdetermined2::twilightsmile::duck::raritywink:

omg omg !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its on youtube (squeal) hahaha yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!11:applejackconfused::heart::pinkiesmile::pinkiehappy::pinkiegasp::raritystarry::raritystarry::duck::twilightsheepish::twilightblush::yay::moustache::eeyup::scootangel::derpytongue2::derpyderp2::ajsmug::derpyderp1::coolphoto::rainbowdetermined2::twilightsmile::duck::raritywink:

yes a longer sequel the fun has been doubbled!!!!!:pinkiehappy: duh duh duh!!!vyarh!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

:twilightoops::twilightblush::twilightsheepish::eeyup::duck::yay::scootangel::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::twilightangry2::derpyderp2:uh this is weird but poultron are you the true moderator please put it as a comment not do not send it as a letter any pony please and thank you!!1:ajsmug::ajbemused::derpytongue2::fluttershyouch::pinkiesad2::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowdetermined2::raritystarry:

[img]12345678910111213[/img] omg they have new ponies out soon like zecora and dj pon3

:twilightsheepish::twilightsheepish::pinkiehappy::pinkiesad2::pinkiecrazy: im starting to write a story called the pony in my arms:pinkiehappy: with pinkie !!!!!!

hey if you go on equestrian potals thers is this weird pic that has a brony in a crowd wth other bronies and he is holding a sign that reads fur sweetie pie:rainbowderp::facehoof::twilightoops::twilightoops: um i have no idea if its me or.... well ok:moustache::eeyup::pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::ajbemused::applejackconfused::applejackunsure::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2::trollestia::twistnerd::unsuresweetie:

hey if you go on equestria daily thers is this weird pic that has a brony in a crowd wth other bronies and he is holding a sign that reads fur sweetie pie:rainbowderp::facehoof::twilightoops::twilightoops: um i have no idea if its me or.... well ok:moustache::eeyup::pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::ajbemused::applejackconfused::applejackunsure::derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2::trollestia::twistnerd::unsuresweetie: sorry typo:pinkiehappy:

somepony put a comment!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightangry2::fluttercry:

somepony put a comment!!!!!!!!!!!:twilightangry2::fluttercry:[img]talk boring[/img]

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