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alafoel


alaoel + foal: alafoel

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This story is a sequel to Blue and Gold


Blueblood wants to be with Shining Armor again, even if it seems impossible.

THIS STORY IS AN ALTERNATE ENDING TO METRONOME'S FIC "Blue And Gold" AND WILL NOT MAKE ANY SENSE (SERIOUSLY) UNLESS YOU HAVE READ THAT FIRST.

A more experimental fic, inspired by (and published with permission from) metronome. Please check out their stuff!

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Comments ( 2 )
metronome #1 · 1 week ago · · 1 ·

oh wow!

i love the extra bits you've added since the first draft that you showed me. i especially love the ending that brings in twilight a bit more, and explains maybe a tad more about what happened, and i like that it really grounds the ending and lets the reader know that this is real and this is blueblood's life now. oh, and the popcorn. love it.

ive said it before and i'll say it again, beautiful fic, and i'm honored that my little m/m contest project inspired it. thank you so much!

alafoel #2 · 1 week ago · · 1 ·

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Thank you! I'm really honored you enjoyed my little alternate ending and don't, like, think I'm some weirdo crackpot for writing it. I really enjoyed Blue and Gold - I definitely would have never written a Blueblood / Shining Armor fic if you didn't already prove that it could actually be done really well. You made me care for the pairing - hell, you made me care for Blueblood. I didn't think that was possible.

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