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Twilit Memories

After talking to her daughter, Twilight remembers her past. She remembers how each of her friends left, and how she would do anything to see them again.

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Meadow_Elune

Meadow_Elune #1 · Oct 6th, 2012 · · ·

Very moving. A few minor spelling and capitalization errors, but not bad overall.

Kitchy

Kitchy #2 · Oct 6th, 2012 · · ·

Hm... Well, it's not bad. I've seen better, but I've also seen plenty worse. I suppose the idea isn't too bad, 'Twilight's friends move away and she reminisces them through a letter', however I'm pretty sure I've seen this before. I think that some people might not be too happy about the fact that Twilight now has a daughter, but that's to be expected. I also noticed some tiny grammar and spelling issues, but those are forgivable. All in all, this story was an okay read.

8.5/10

Yours truly, Pharilax.

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