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I liked this very much, I it going to be updated soon? I hope so
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Yep, sorry for the delay, got a lot of stuff happening. If i don't get distracted the next chapter should be there in a few days
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Thank you!
Most likely because that's exactly what had happened.
Mission accomplished!
That's not good...
Rocky: "Just what would Twilight do?!"
Twilight:
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Source.
Go for it!
Good premise!
I enjoyed reading it.
Suggestion:
I noticed a few typos while reading this. Consider running your text through a spellchecker, and even if you just use the one build-in inside your browser.
(The one in my browser already found a few inside the quotes i posted.)
Okay, that's better than I expected.
I mean there are other cities, and it's only days, not weeks of travel.
But hey, they did call it "Generator No. 243" earlier, so there is actually a high chance there are several more generators out there.
Also, it's good to see there is no one forcing them to stay. Or at least not yet...
He is not wrong.
Unless, at this very moment, he gets replaced by a newly finished automaton...
That was a close one...
Okay, that does sound dangerous...
Didn't he bring a cart to carry the coal? maybe it can be repurposed to carry ponies. Also, wasn't his name Firm Keep?
I just noticed something:
If you put enough pressure on coal, it will eventually be turned into diamond! Maybe that's a hidden reference between his job and his sisters name?
Maybe you can get a prosthesis, too?
Heh. You can only hope...
(And what do you mean with "ll will be yours in no time"?)
Now imagine the trouble you would be in if there were no spirit protection...
Not long until there isn't a single miner left...
Still, good to hear there are nearby villages and cities, meaning Equestria still has a chance to survive.
Go for it!
(And it's probably supposed to be "sign in", not "sigh in".)
Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it and look forwards to see what happens next.
You think there will be a meeting/confrontation between him and Diamond later, maybe even in the middle of the mission?
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Damn i didn't expect anybody to put in so much work into commenting a random aah story. I appricieate
And yeah there's a lot of typos, for which i apologise. Ill try to get that fixed for the next chapter.
And about him meeting his sister, WEll you'll just have to stick around to find out.
I got my ass back to writing after i was busy with other stuff so it shouldnt take too long that to happen
Discontent falls slightly.
ONWARDS! Into the Frost lands! Danger and Death stocks every turn.
Except it will be because of you.
For all you know not helping him might doom the city. And that includes you.
Let's hope they make a good team, because this will be a very dangerous mission.
Or they might say Look at that big, strong stallion! He is helping the small mare in her time of need so they can complete the mission! What an example for all of us! instead?
Diamond Chase: "Welcome to my world, little brother."
Probably won't feel like a few hours...
No, please continue!
I can feel the tension rising...
It does... but you are not safe yet.
Good chapter!
I enjoyed reading it.
I wonder what happens next?
They will probably rest in the mine until sunrise, hoping the Ursa doesn't break through.
Then they will try to continue on their way.
But it may also be possible the mine itself plays a larger role.
Maybe it's mine shaft is leading towards their target (or something near it), allowing them to bypass the Ursa completely.
Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but the hole in the ground (in place of the elevator) implies you can get down, but not up.
On a side note: the captain really likes swear words, doesn't he?