A story (or hopefully a set of stories) set in the wold of combined Frostpunk and My Little Pony! See the adventures of ponies that adapted to the Equestrian Frostland, because they might not turn the wheels of history, but they will defenetely (hope
Suddenly, an almost deafening whistle rang throu the dark corridors of the coal mine.
I walked home through the city’s narrow alleys. They almost always looked improvised, as if they were quickly squeezed between the talll steel framed and wooden buildings that stand here right now in a rush, and then nopony bothered to make them into proper streets.
Most likely because that's exactly what had happened.
“What’s fake about it? Hey! Come back! What’s fake about it?!” I shouted at the painting, but the spirit seemed to leave me alone with my thoughts. Fucking smartass, he knows that i’ll be thinking about it now!
Mission accomplished!
the piece of the Generator that protruded from above the house across the street continued to be cold and dark, encased in some kind of steel makeshift scaffolding.
That's not good...
It wasn’t supposed to break! Ever! It was supposed to be the finest of equestria’s engineering! Concept of The Twilight Sparkle herself! I threw the paper on the ground, and began walking in circles and hyperventilating.
I’ll go out into the frostland, and maybe, I won’t be able to actually do it, but at least, I’ll show them that I didn’t give up!
Go for it!
Good premise! I enjoyed reading it.
Suggestion: I noticed a few typos while reading this. Consider running your text through a spellchecker, and even if you just use the one build-in inside your browser. (The one in my browser already found a few inside the quotes i posted.)
I liked this very much, I it going to be updated soon? I hope so
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Yep, sorry for the delay, got a lot of stuff happening. If i don't get distracted the next chapter should be there in a few days
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Thank you!
Most likely because that's exactly what had happened.
Mission accomplished!
That's not good...
Rocky: "Just what would Twilight do?!"
Twilight:
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Go for it!
Good premise!
I enjoyed reading it.
Suggestion:
I noticed a few typos while reading this. Consider running your text through a spellchecker, and even if you just use the one build-in inside your browser.
(The one in my browser already found a few inside the quotes i posted.)