My house, My say

"There is simply not enough crime in Ponyville to need to employ five guardsmares. If you skip the regular monster attacks of course." That's what Steady Watch heard while getting fired from her life long job as a guardsmare. Motivated by others, she decides to get it back with all the means she has. But does she really want it?

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MorganaTheNotCat

MorganaTheNotCat #1 · Aug 14th, 2023 · 3 · ·

The worst part about this story is that it ends. Great little story, resonated with me a lot

Theresa

Theresa #2 · Aug 14th, 2023 · 3 · ·

It good but I would love mom getting her just desserts. Plus aj did leave and come home but the fact is she could have chosen a different path.

Luna MacArthur

Luna MacArthur #3 · Aug 15th, 2023 · 2 · ·

The mom's a b-tch.

PonyDragon

PonyDragon #4 · 4 weeks ago · · ·

I walked into a bush, which happened to be empty inside, so I hid in it without any problems. I made two holes for my eyes by eating the leaves I had in front of my face. They were good and juicy! I always wondered why they were so gnawed all the time.
Perfect! Set like that, I was ready to wait! Now it’s just a matter of time before a crime happens, and I’ll be right there to jump out of that bush and stop it!

First: Yummy leaves!
Second: Considering this is Ponyville you will most likely have to wait a very long time. Remeber the reason your post was abolished?

“I like the Geraniums, please.” She said confidently, and looked around, probably looking for me.

Any connection to the chapter title?
We will see...

I felt so stupid that I wished Celestia would send me into the sun

: "I can assure you: if I would banish every stupid pony into the sun Equestria would be empty by now..."

"Then she will." She finished off her apple pie, and got up. "Now, maybe your new dream job will be peeling the old paint off the ceiling? Because that's what's next. What's your cutie mark have to say about it?"
"It's a pair of steady binoculars, so I doubt it's that, but okay, let's get to it."

Yeah, better keep looking.

Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

As some others had pointed out, this story ends very sudden. Will there be an epilogue, maybe something about the future relationship between her and her mother?

On an unrelated note: Could she just move into another area?
I'm sure there are other places in Equestria looking for highly motivated guardsmares.

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