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Journeys like never before

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This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: Friendship is Cine-magic: Pooh's Grand Adventure: The Search for Christopher Robin


(Season 1, Episode 4)

Another adventure approaches for Twilight Sparkle and her friends. In this brand new mission, they journey to the underwater city of Bikini Bottom. On this day, the popular restaurant, the Krusty Krab, loses it's most valuable item; the Krabby Patty secret formula. Now the Main Six and Spike must team up with SpongeBob Squarepants, a cheery, yellow sea sponge, and Plankton, a grumpy and selfish rival to the restaurant to find the lost formula from the clutches of an evil pirate.

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Comments ( 63 )

Aha! I knew they would be seaponies!

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My Little Pony: Friendship Is Cine-Magic:
The SpongeBob Movie: Sponge Out Of Water

Not a bad start!

Just saying, if you use anything that was originally from my story, please give me credit.

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I want to try to avoid using ideas from your iteration. But, if that happens, I’ll make sure to give credit. Don’t worry.

Grammar Error
“Welcome To Air Plankton. Please Put Your Seats
Back And Tray Tables Up As We’re Now
Approaching Our Final Destination.”
Plankton Mocked

oh boy...things are going to get messy.

Normal forms for the Mane 6 and Spike on the surface world?

Grammar Errors
“You Better Keep Reading, Mr. Pirate…” The Gulls
Turned Around And Pointed Their Backsides To Him.
“Or Else”

“Maybe We Would Could Help Him Out.”
Pinkie Eagerly.

The fake formula not sat on the pressure plate. It beeped several times with a green light flashing, then it stopped. Plankton stood with an accomplished smile. Now it was time to take the real formula back to the Chum Bucket.

It’s “now” not “not.”

Love it good:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::heart::heart:😀😃

The adventure continues...with a couple hiccups.

what awaits our heroes in time?

Good Chapter The Grammar And Spelling Are Just Right.
Twilight And Her Friends Just Saw Their Past Selves.

Grammar Error
“He’s Here To Kills Us.” Rarity Wailed Dramatically

Thanks for the New Chapter. And Happy Holidays.

Twilight And Her Friends Not Only Transform Back Their Pony And Dragon Forms But Now For The First Time They Are CGI.

Merry Christmas to you too as well!

I forgot how chaotic the SpongeBob world could generally be. Didn't ease them in as easily as the first movie for sure.

Well bad luck that they got an introduction to SpongeBob's friends when their literally at their worst.

I know exactly what Spike wrote, but I'll leave it to the rest of you to figure it out

Grammar Errors

“Maybe This Guy Knows Where We Are.” Patrick Came Up To A Middle-Aged Man’s Feet. “He Looks Smart. He’s Got Five Heads.”

“If You Ate All That, You Have Enough Energy To Run Around The Whole World.” Sandy Said.

“Home Of The Krabby Patty”?” SpongeBob Read The Sail.? “But The Krusty Krab Is The Home Of The Krabby Patty!”

“Whatever You’re Going To Do, Make It Quick! They’re Closing In On Us!” Mr. Krabs Said Fearfully.

“I Have A Bad Feeling About This.” Mr. Krabs Said Nervously.

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You Forgot
“Home Of The Krabby Patty.” SpongeBob Read The Bold, Red Lettering On The Ship’s Sail. “But The Krusty Krab Is The Home Of The Krabby Patty!”

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Let Me Be In Charge Of The Grammar And Spelling.

oh boy, time to get serious!

I think they would have been more PO'ed with everyone after all that.

Okay. Finally up to speed. I will say that Pinkie getting in on the sugar scene was worth a laugh with the mental image I got for it right now. Also makes sense that Spike would have helped out for this last part here as far as writing goes.

Grammar Error
“Nope. This One’s On You.” The Starfish Said Bluntly.

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Fixed. Strange though. I always thought Patrick said “mostly on you.” Oh, well.

Some nice snappy dialogue for a chaotic climax.

hmm, not bad. what's next?

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