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Twilight, you are a utter fool!!!

If your friends and the two royal sisters eventually finds out the truth. They'll will both be beyond pissed at you for messing with something that you shouldn't mess with. And be utterly horrified and worried about possibly losing you forever to this Pure Evil god-like Entity and his killer followers.

P.S. Twilight is still a Unicorn? Despite this being a aftermath to the first Equestria Girls Movie?

Why can't she talk in the realm? Nick Cage and others can talk. In my head, characters are only quiet because they don't want to be heard by the killer.
Also. Why does she wake back up? My guess is she needs to die before she's truly trapped. That's why Jake sacrificed himself for her, But why would the entity choose her if that was the case? It's not immortal, and chooses it's victims based on how valuable they are to it, but also by how few will notice the disappearance. Twilight's disappearance will be noticed by MANY.

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I attempted to unfurl my wings, but they remained immobile at my sides no matter how hard I willed them to move.

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Thanks for commenting!

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Alicorn. I toyed with the idea of making it human Twilight, but I figure The Entity would get a kick out of forcing a unicorn into its trials.

Thank you for taking time and reading and commenting!

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Cool a DBD fan.

So this was written like 8 months ago. I was like I'll release it when Halloween comes around. Nic came out. I was like well crap guess they can talk. Lol. Also the no talking would be during trials only. Not at the campfire.

So the logic here behind Twilight waking up was a warning from The Entity. IE this is what you are peering into. You sure you want to keep going? When she immediately goes back to investigating The Entity is like alright then, you're mine now. The Entity isn't interested in Twilight like the other survivors. It can see the "magic" behind Twilight and so when she keeps drilling it decides taking her before anyone else in Equestria (Especially Celestia and Luna) knows what she's doing is the best course of action.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Is it just going to be Trapper that shows up or will some of the others also show up like Wraith, Legion, Oni.

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If the story gets enough interest, I plan to do most, if not all, of the killers. There might be some connections between some of the Equestrians and the killers as well, just to spice things up and not make it too obvious.

Oni would be sick to do. Demon Dash is terrifying.

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There might be some connections between some of the Equestrians and the killers as well, just to spice things up and not make it too obvious.

How!? There are in separate worlds and different species?

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Take this with a grain of salt. To elaborate what I mean is, the Entity searches for terrible beings right? And they come from anywhere. Pyramid Head, Silent Hill. Michael Myers, Lampkin Lane. The Dredge, Garden of Joy.

So why not a creature like Sombra? Or Chrysalis?

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I can see the Entity summoning forth variations of the ponies from other universes.

For instance: Rainbow getting dropped into a “Rainbow Factory map” with her lab-coat-wearing counterpart being the Killer, hunting her, Scootaloo, and other survivors.

Or even Pinkie Pie being dropped into, of course, a “Cupcakes” scenario.

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Exactly, those are great ideas. A Pinkamena killer that went crazy and killed her friends, etc.

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I mean, the Xenomorph and Demogorgon are in the game, so clearly the Entity is not restricted to just humans.

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True. That's why I mentioned The Dredge as well... Whatever that thing is, lol.

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Got it. This was pre Nick. But there are others who also talk, like Trickster, Mastermind, Ashley Williams
I'll be sticking around to see how this turns out as the start is a bit unclear of what Twilight is going to do now.

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The Dredge is kinda an eldritch horror. It consumes you and you become one with it. It is the most powerful being the entity has captured and is able to defy the entity's will. It ate Maurice despite that not being intentionally possible.

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Yes I meant in trials. I know Ji-Woon talks. He's my boy. I've always felt like the Entity didn't let them communicate with each other cause it'd be too op for the survivors. A nod to the fact that the devs originally didn't want voice chat to be a thing and that's why there was no in game chat.

On The Dredge lol I know. It was mostly a joke cause he's so gross.

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