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Tempest_Flare


Long lost alicorn of destiny. Lives on earth in a human form. Loves displaced fanfics.

Comments ( 17 )

First off; can you elaborate what I just read? I'm a little lost only your writing plot. No pun intended.

Second: I can help when it comes to building things; including castles.

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It's meant to be a self-insert. a guy who's a little crazy and speaks to the fourth wall has woken up in Equestria 6 months before the first episode. The fire thing is something I've written in personal stories before. more will explained in later chapters

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second I'm planning on a second chapter montage of building the castle and Old Cantorlot (my name for the everfree city) this will be my training to use magic and other things

11674937 Thanks for the update.
So here's a little video dedicated to your goal.👇

One; So many red tags!!?? Dang!

And two; Why the split personality?

How can you "protect" Equestria, if one of you is a "monster"? Very counterproductive, don't you think.

Is this a comedy?

*looks at red tags*

"Some kids Gunna die tonight!"

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Think of it as an antihero and true hero living in the same body. Now I don't have DID though I do have Schizophrenia and manic bipolar which can lead to vast mood/personality shifts for me

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Personally, an anti-hero ISN'T a "monster".

Deadpool, Red Hood, and possibly Punisher are good examples.

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pony label here a killer is a monster and one that kills shrouded in what looks to be black magic (black fire) is a umbra the worst type of monster

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Oh yeah, I hate it when the ponies are so black-and-white minded that it sucks.

I mean if they spare, a messed up child rapist or sex slaver, or even a remorseless serial killer like the Joker for example in the story.

I WON'T blame you for slapping the heck out of them.

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In this case, common sense prevails

Edit: The story and ponies I mean they actually act smart killing killers convincted of it and all

So far, this is the most stupid and tasteless work I've read this year.

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Well i can't please everyone

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Now that time has passed can you please explain? I would like to understand your thoughts as to why it's tasteless.

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