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Colour Spectrum

A one shot
That I wrote
About Rainbow Dash
And the first time she did a Sonic Rainboom.
Tagged adventure because ask Rainbow Dash, she'll tell you it was.

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KartalTheWriter

KartalTheWriter #1 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · ·

You cannot argue with the logic of Miss Ranbow Dash.

EDIT: Nice story. I love the way you described things.

Scribblestick

Scribblestick #2 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · ·

This was a fun little one-shot. The only suggestion I have is to make your sentences longer before the race. Short sentences work well during an action sequence, but too many of them get annoying during buildup.

Also,