A fic I first intended to be a one shot, but will end up being one of my longest. It's just me venting my frustration at homophobes, in Equestria. It's basically about how Lyra and Bon Bon come out of the closet, receive much hate, and go on a quest for equality!
Rated teen for swearing, sexual references, mild violence, mild drug use.
I was going to do my own cover art, but Lyra is stupidly hard to draw.
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Welp, here is this story. Enjoy!
Also, it's not really romantic, but I don't know what else to tag it as.
I didn't know you were writing another story! I need to read this. Come here, read list, come here... good boy. Now eat this fic for me, 'kay?
>lyra
>hard to draw
wat
oh look more green texting ahead
>rage on homophobia
>includes lyra
must read.
alright i'll leave another comment when i finish reading.
This is flipping fantastic. I have a few small things I'll leave.
1. When speaking, use "" instead of ''.
2. Double-spacing between paragraphs makes it easier to read.
3. You used feet instead of hooves, and forgot a few capitals.
4. I don't think you mentioned Doctor Whooves being at the alley when Bon Bon was stabbed.
That's really all; favorited, and I'm excited for more.
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I must say, I did do a lot of this late at night, but I know that it no excuse for poor grammar! As with all my stories, I will be doing more editing later, but it is hard to do on my tablet and I only have limited access to a computer. But don't worry, I will do it!
As for the single quote/double quote, I much rather single quote. Sorry if it annoys you.
EDIT: Fixed some of the spacing issues! Hope that makes it easier to read!
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It's just her hair.
It's so hard.
But different art styles suit different people, so good for you if you can draw her.
Also, thanks for reading!
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You probably didn't know I was writing this... because I didn't tell anypony!
Badoom boom tshh
So, yeah, this one ends quite abruptly, and it's shorter than the others, but that is because (insert reason here).
Don't worry, the next one will be longer (I hope!)
This story keeps getting more and more interesting. Also, dat cliffhanger. You're very good at making those.
Although this chapter seemed more like a filler than an advance in the plot, I enjoyed it.
Now to wait for the next chapter.
More please C: This is fantastic, and I'm awfully impatient.
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Thank you! I'm taking a day off school today (naughty me) because I have sooo much writing to do! As well as this story, I'm actually writing a movie script. Like, an entire movie. It has to be done in two weeks (AAAHHH PANIC MODE ENGAGE), so yeah.
But never fear, I will be working on this story more as well.
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Cliffhangers? Me? To be honest, I'd never noticed. Thanks for leaving a comment!
Should I tag this as slice of life?
This may or may not give a major look into the next part of the story
Short, but the chapter was good. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Just out of curiosity, how did you find this story?
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No, I'm just wondering because I'd like to get my story out to other people, and how can I do that if I don't know how they're finding it?!
But no, your choice of reading has nothing to do with me, each to their own
EDIT: I'm not really sure how that comment was supposed to come out, but don't think I got the message across very well... do you see what I mean though?
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And no, I'm not stalking you.
Much.
you know in the description it says mild violence, last time i checked getting attacked in a back ally and nearly being slashed to death isnt mild.... just a thought
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Yeah, but I didn't really describe the scene at all, just retold it. That's pretty much as bad as it's going to get.
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i know just trying to make a bad joke...
Did this stop updating? The last comment says 38 weeks, but this is freaking gold!
Please finish this story already!!!!!
This is a great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
du du du du du du du du du!