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Misty Shadow


Sombra is cool.

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Pipp Petals has gone missing. Following her absence, rumors of Canterlove Studios, the newly renovated Canterlogic building, being haunted go viral on the internet. Detective Zipp gets right on the case of her sister's disappearance, but will she and her friends be able to handle the spooky truth behind all this?


NOTE: This story takes place after Make Your Mark Chapter 4 and before the end of Make Your Mark Chapter 5. The cover art was done by the incredible Dash-Wang.

https://www.deviantart.com/dash-wang

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 7 )

I'll admit, I wasn't expecting Pipp to willing ghost herself, but you seem to have a solid grasp on the characterization thus far, so I'm gonna keep an eye on this one.

Pipp turning herself into a ghost for the sake of what I assume is a prank does seem extreme but given her love of spooky things I can see her doing this. I do like how you incorporated Sprout here as a lovable nuisance who seems to have some surprisingly decent baking skills.

“You, Izzy, and Misty are hardly my idea of adult ponies…” an unamused Zipp thought to herself, not impressed by what she felt was Sprout’s attempt at subtly flexing his supposed maturity. “You especially, at least Izzy and Misty are cutely immature…”

she has a point.

So... is Sprout a ghost like Pipp now? I admit I certainly wasn't expecting him to sacrifice himself like that.

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Yes. There is a difference between him and Pipp though in that he's free from the malice of the spirits, which will come into play later.

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