For anyone wondering why I'm here, blame TV tropes.
This story is a sequel to A Pegasus Horn
Scootaloo is having trouble flying. One of her new classmates can fly a little, but not well. Her other new classmate knows how to make his sister fly well.
This just might work...
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Nicely done! And nice mention of derpy.
O can relate very much here, got a oc with similar condition
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Thanks.
Just curious, what caused the condition in your oc's case?
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Crippled wing from premature birth, thus unable to fly properly. If you like to hear more, be my guest
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Yikes. That's even rougher than I imagined. How does he (or is it she?) handle it?
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He's called hanzal and can actually fly, just not as long or good as a normal Pegasus. He managed to improve, able to do things better than some could do with two
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Nice.
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Personality, polite and friendly, knack in history and older technology but insecure about love. Basically, he thinks who would want a Pegasus unable to fly properly? Plus he was bullied for his Handicap.
By the way, i see scootaloo as a late bloomer but my Story with her had a similar fate to hanzal
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Okay, it's kind of funny to hear that he has a knack for history and old technology. I've enjoyed studying older technology ever since I was a kid. (Still do.)
In Scootaloo's case, the late bloomer idea makes sense; it just would have made writing this story harder. Presumably, this version of her may fly eventually. I just haven't decided how. The options so far include (a). medical treatment, (b). learning a way to fly without using magic, or (c). the Crusaders building a small airplane with Scoot acting as both the pilot and the engine.
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well, if you want him to your OC, go ahead, I'd supply you with his description.
And Scootaloo, of course, i just thought it would make most sense. as to how her fate is similar to hanzal, lets just say in one of my first works, she lost a wing but replaced it with a prosthetic/cybernetic one.
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pardon, old habit
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Who's your O.C. ?
what's the name of your O.C. and their Bio
Handicapped & Disabled Bronies & Ponies Unite
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Mind is CautiousFlight
daughter of 2 WonderBolts
born with out any PegasusMagic
MareFriend of my main/mane O.C. FlashTruth
she is very Motherly
she also can't have kids
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So... your O.C. is like SharkPuncher
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or
(D) VitaminPills that bots your PegasusMagic
(E) MagicCrystal Neckless...
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you should see what my O.C. Bio-Bionic can do
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