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Abaddon the Redeemer and the Justaerin died in the Ullanor Crusade destroying the Ork Attack Planet, but what if that was not so. Read how Abaddon and his brothers find themselves in an unknown land known as Equestria and find their way home.

This is a crossover between Jayfiction's excellent Imperium Ascendent, continued by theklickator and My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.

Inspired by My Little Xeno by MrTea on FimFiction

I do not own Warhammer or My Little Pony, credit goes to Games Workshop and Hasbro Studios.

This story will not be updated frequently as I am prioritizing my first story Thus Did The Imperium of Mankind Fight There which you can find on wattpad, username ccen26, using a different email account.

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Okay, where even to begin. First i'm pretty sure Luna wolves first company is named justaerin. I have never heard of luna templars. Tho its been years since i read Horus rising. Second. Abbadon never fought on Luna, because it still was during unification wars, And Abbadon was still a child in chotonia. There were no daemons on Luna. Imperium did not know of daemons and what did they know about those that lived in the warp. They thought were just a xeno species. What comes to apothecaries, i'm pretty sure those that are in terminator armor are called primus medicae. Apothecaries are only in normal power armor. And what a hell is gene-syncing? Never heard of it. Was not super human hearing enough? Or did you just make it up. And what comes to Abbadon, i cannot think one that more unsuitable to give mercy of any kind. Hell he wanted to destroy interex because they did not immediately submit.

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The Justaerin are the terminator part of the 1st Company of the Sons of Horus/Luna Wolves. They're not the entire company though. You're absolutely right on everything else though.

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That is in the original lore of 40k, but in Imperium Ascendent, from what I read, the entire Justaerin are Terminators.

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This story is based on Jayfictions Imperium Ascendent, an excellent fanfiction of if the Emperor of the grimdark future sent a message with future knowledge back in time to prevent the terrible future.

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That still does not unbaby Abbadon that was not fighting during Luna campaign.

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Again, the lore in Imperium Ascendent is different, the Emperor wanted to reform Abaddon so he brought him to Terra to be turned into one of the first 16th legion astartes

Again, the lore in Imperium Ascendent is different, the Emperor wanted to reform Abaddon so he brought him to Terra to be turned into one of the first 16th legion astartes.

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wha..what? That's idiotic. He would need to wait conquering terra for that. Just skip Luna conquest. Somehow breakout of sol system that was besieged by xenos and pirates near jupiters space ports. Go to chotonia, just leaves Horus there. Takes Abbadon that would need to murder his father that affected him heavily. And Abbadon would need to be molded by local gangers so he would become tough enough to become space marine. Then emperor would need to come back and go to terra again and start over again. This must be the stupidest thing he could do, its absolutely retarded.

Horus and the Primarchs were saved because of the knowledge sent back in time and Luna was conquered ealier, also there were space marines in the original lore that were from cthonia before horus was reunited, see the son of horus Iacton Qruze

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Horus and the Primarchs were saved because of the knowledge sent back in time and Luna was conquered ealier, also there were space marines in the original lore that were from cthonia before horus was reunited, see the son of horus Iacton Qruze. You should read Imperium Ascendent, its rated in space battle forum and tv trope and fanfiction.net as one of the best Warhammer alternate universe fanfictions. Its too long for me to explain, but it will make sense when you read it.

Comment posted by CC12-06 deleted Jul 27th, 2023

dang i already like this fic

I'm enjoying it so far people the good work

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https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/imperium-ascendant-heresy-less-40k.596194/. This is a link to Imperium Ascendant Fanfic by the way, and as C said it was an alternate timeline of warhammer 40k where the Scattering of the Primarch didn't happened

I am enjoying it so far but you made character emotionless and monotone, sure i could probably guess by what they are feeling by imagining it using the respective character's voice and i know it can be hard to describe what the character is feeling by using word alone, but for the love of the Emperor at least use a quotation mark like for example:

Ezekyle Abaddon: Greetings inhabitants of this planet, I am Ezekyle Abaddon also known as the Redeemer, from the Imperium of Mankind, First Captain of the Lunar Templars Legion, Legiones Astartes, First Company Justaerin. These "gesturing to the other Terminators" are my brothers.

Instead you can do it like this:

Ezekyle Abaddon: "Greetings inhabitants of this planet, I am Ezekyle Abaddon also known as the Redeemer, from the Imperium of Mankind, First Captain of the Lunar Templars Legion, Legiones Astartes, First Company Justaerin. These" he gestured his hand to the other Terminators "are my brothers"

Can Imperium Ascendant be found on fanfiction.net?

cool keep up the good work

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