It is a future Equestria, long after the era of Twilight Sparkle and the stellar Princesses. Pony civilisation is dying as their lands are being stripped bare by almost unstoppable clouds of dark magic. In this time Sir Starlight travels the world with the help of the crew of the airship 'EverDream', hunting for the answer to the riddle presented to him by a white pony that haunts his dreams. But what does this have to do with the Dark? What is it that the white pony wants him to find - and what secrets of the past will they uncover?
Chapters (7)
civilization*
You need an editor and some formatting help. This is a ridiculously interesting premise being spoiled by the lack of firm fixes to the language and overall layout. Your first chapter is excellent length and if you can keep this going, more power to you. I want to see more.
-Chessie
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thanis for comments I know my spelling and grammer needs work but I am badley dyslexic (maby i should put it on my profile) I allready have somepony checkign my work and partice has improved it massivley but it is still the hardest part by far. if anyponyelse wants to volintear to proof read for me I will allways acept help