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CrimsonEquine


Improvement is a dire mistress.

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Two ponies are murdered in this fic but there is no #death or #dark tag.

It's also weirdly written like;

Pear Butter did the same as her tongue went out of the mouth. Noticing such an obscene gesture, Big Mac raised himself up with his powerful hooves and licked her tongue. They felt them lick against each other.

IIIIiiii don't know what I was expecting, honestly.

There is death but it's an odd way of it... dark: they died I guess... but nothing too sad about it. It just didn't have the impact that I was hoping for though.

I get it. it could have been saved for October, maybe a continuation by then

Well that was something. You need a gore tag

Ah hell nah I’m leaving

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