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OmniFox

OmniFox #1 · Nov 21st, 2018 · · 6 ·

Did I already told you about Spike in a relationship with both DT and SS?

LILDASHIEGRINGO

LILDASHIEGRINGO #2 · Nov 21st, 2018 · 8 · ·

Both dialogue and style of story are broken and needs fixing. had fun reading it like a robot.

Isseus

Isseus #3 · Nov 21st, 2018 · 6 · ·

9306051 Not to mention the utter lack of proper punctuation and run-on sentences that turn into whole paragraphs.

MLPFollower #4 · Dec 15th, 2019 · · ·

Would really love to see a follow-up of Pear Butter and Bright Mac do the Karma Sutra when the latter gets back.

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