"I will kill this creature!" Nightmare declared. Black hooves pounded into the ground around her, reducing patches of perfectly green grass to a dank brown soup of torn roots and slurry. Her legs sunk into their hoof-made mud mixture and pushed upward to propel Nightmare's body up into the air. Nightmare achieved her ambition and lifted three feet into the air, all the while the furry being riding upon her back refused to let go.
"Sir Angel Bunny of the Court of Fluttershy fears no beast!" the animal declared in a language only woodland creatures and a crazy stallion named Pokey Pierce could understand. Immediately Sir Angel's eyes caught the deep blue of the wild beast's black magic. Such an occurrence meant only one thing: the beast would strike again. His long, slender white legs ejected the brave bunny off the eldritch pony.
Nightmare snarled and sent a telekinetic wave toward the spot Angel once stood. However, since the annoying furred vermin no longer rode upon on her back, she merely ended up yanking her own tail instead. The force of the pull toppled Nightmare's balance, sending her plummeting into the brown and green slick below.
"Ha! Take that knave! This is a victory for the Court of Fluttershy. None defeat the will of the Stare Master."
The vile monster Fluttershy had dubbed "Nightmare" rose from the mud. Its face twisted and contorted in fury. Such fury Sir Angel had only seen once before when Madame Fluttershy became "New Fluttershy" and tossed about her friends. Sir Angel stood his ground and quickly reminded himself the beast was just a child, hardly a true threat.
Nightmare leapt at the bunny, intent to kill at maximum. Angel grabbed a pocket watch on the ground beside him and jumped into the air after her. For a second the world went in slow motion. The two approached each other in the air, both ready to lay down their final blows. Nightmare never delivered her attack, instead she received the blunt end of a brass watch to the cheek.
"Victory for the good Madame Fluttershy!" Angel declared, crawling atop his fallen foe.
Behind Nightmare a massive purple oak rose from the dirt, casting a long shadow over the fallen alicorn's body. Twilight watched from its entrance with annoyance, shaking her head in disapproval. Deciding to keep Nightmare Moon was quickly becoming Twilight's biggest regret every day.
When the idea of harboring a known criminal in Ponyville was brought to Twilight, she was hesitant, to say the least. However, the mare trusted Luna's wisdom and accepted her decree. With reluctance, Twilight took the duty of watching over the child; mostly because she felt she was one of the few who wouldn't immediately want to kill the pony. At the moment though, that didn't sound like a bad idea.
"Nightmare. That's enough. The Crusaders are going to be here any minute." The child pulled her face from the soup, with thick streams of mud trailing from her face to the ground. Behind Nightmare, Angel Bunny returned to his master, Fluttershy, to continue searching for some lost chickens.
"I don't care who's coming. I am Nightmare Moon, the true princess of the night! I will not do anything you, that cake guzzling black hole, or the stuck-in-the-medieval-period moron tell me to do." the child hissed with burning hatred.
"Nightmare. You've been sitting around the library, doing nothing but read books, try to set Spike on fire, and practice your levitation. Princess Luna says you have to study the magic of friendship alongside me."
"Or what." she snarled with a deep scowl.
"You could be executed. That's what." Nightmare's pupils dilated.
"Fine... I'll meet these 'Crusaders', but I won't like it."
"And don't try to light them on fire or freeze them."
"Oh come on!"
The patter of small hooves halted the conversation between student and eldritch monstrosity. In the distance a wall of orange, white, and yellow rose up from the horizon. A trio of fillies slowly trod toward the library.
Fear coursed through Sweetie's young legs, screaming at her to run away and not face the upcoming horror. Only the reassurance of Twilight Sparkle's protection pushed her further.
Beside her, an orange pegasus's eyes looked as if they were she were about to fall asleep. From her mouth slid odd curses about having to play with Nightmare Moon and Princess Luna being a bit of a jerk. Unlike Sweetie Belle, she felt no fear over the alicorn. Her only issue was her own belief hanging out with Nightmare would be the equivalent of standing indefinitely beside Diamond Tiara. Angry hisses dripped from her as the image of Diamond Tiara entered her head.
Applebloom did not fear the child they would meet. Granny Smith told her to do her best to be a good example for Nightmare, that no pony could be completely bad. Besides, Applebloom had seen her at the town meeting where the alicorn's residency was announced. If anything, the beaver that attacked the black filly on stage proved to Applebloom: Nightmare was no longer a threat.
Nightmare watched the trio take their time to trot up to her. Quickly, she noted how Sweetie Belle kept her distance. Reptilian eyes met the Crusaders' own and glared back at them. There was little but anger and hate in the black creature's gaze.
In the crusader's eyes, the innocence of a child twinkled beautifully like a cave of crystals in the light. It danced, swayed, and mocked Nightmare with its existence. They had not yet seen the horrors that life would bring them. These naive children were unaware of how their dreams would be built up by the adults around them, only for the same ponies to take a hammer to the very thing they helped build.
That wasn't even the worst of the horrors they would face. Even Nightmare did not wish upon these children certain terrors. Terrors such as the angry beaver named Chuck, with his gnashing teeth and moon-hating claws.
"That beaver..."Nightmare whispered with a deep shudder.
"Are you N-Nightmare?" Sweetie asked.
"Yes child. I am the princess of the night." Nightmare smugly replied, enjoying every minute of fear. "Do you fear me Sweetie Belle?"
The unicorn slowly nodded in response. Nightmare rested her armored hoof below Sweetie Belle's chin. Snake eyes peered into to Sweetie Belle's face while the night filly whispered an almost seductive "Good. You should." gently into her ears.
Tufts of dust flew up from the ground and a near inaudible thud hummed through the vicinity. Despite frequently telling herself she was a superior being, Nightmare could not deny she was born from a part of Luna and therefore had bits of the night goddess's personality. As Celestia was with cake, there was no stopping Luna ( or Nightmare ) when their eyes set sight on a certain food. It was the one thing Nightmare could not resist; a delicious spongy moon pie fresh from the oven.
Cracks ran along a foal sized crater where Nightmare previously stood. A miniature sonic rainboom complete with rainbow trail stretched from ground to sky. The Crusaders' eyes followed the lengthy rainbow trail from the crater to the clouds. High pitched squeals racked against the crusader's ears as Nightmare fell to earth, landing directly atop the moon pie.
Sharp fangs snapped the pie in two without hesitation, scraping along a patch of dirt to go with it. Young teeth crashed together then came undone, repeating the cycle until the spongy pie was little more than a slimy brown mush.
The Crusaders gagged as Nightmare chomped down into the pie. Their disgust was only furthered when she made pleased moans, bits of food stuffs dribbling from her mouth.
"More! For the love of Celestia! More!" Nightmare yelled, latching onto Twilight's face with a crazed look in her eye.
Applebloom stared in wonder at the sight of Nightmare Moon screaming for a treat. In a split second, any fear she felt dissipated into nothing. Joy bubbled inside her, creeping up her throat into her mouth. Yellow hooves pressed against the farmer's mouth in attempt her keep her amusement hidden. Soft snickers escaped her lips, tearing down her barriers. The young apple farmer fell to the floor laughing. Sweetie and Scootaloo faced similar circumstances, holding their a hoof to their mouths, failing miserably at hiding their amusement.
"What? Why are you laughing? Stop laughing! I am the princess of the night and you will fear me!" Nightmare cried, her voice cracking in mid sentence. The Crusaders' fits of laughter grew into an uproar, drowning out the monster's complaints.
Deep blue arcane energy covered Nightmare's horn. Fuming with anger, she aimed her weapon at the giggling pile and called upon her dark magics to smite them. Three seconds of magical glow passed with no smiting whatsoever. At Sugarcube Corner the same dark energy hummed inside the Cake's oven.
Opening the steel door, Mr. Cake unveiled his latest confection; a large, moist peanut butter cake, topped with chocolate. Quickly he took note of the odd dark glow emanating from his scrumptious creation and leaned in to inspect the strange phenomenon. In response to his intrusion the cake expanded, grew tentacles, produced three eyes of caramel, and wrapped its dripping buttery tendrils around his throat.
At the library, Nightmare looked about in confusion. Dust covered the coats of the crusaders, who were rolling around in joy. Irritated by the Crusader's amusement, the goddess turned to storm back into the library.
"Play with them or you won't be getting moon pies for a month." Twilight threatened.
"What!? That's just evil!" Nightmare declared. Twilight raised a brow, unsure if the child caught the stunning irony of her own words.
"You need to shave your eyebrows." the alicorn remarked.
She didn't.
"Just go play with them." Twilight commanded. Uttering a few curse words no filly should have known, Nightmare begrudgingly trotted up to the smiling fillies.
"That was hilarious. I can't believe we thought you were supposed to be scary." Scootaloo wiped a joyous tear from her eye and smiled. The dark goddess of night snarled at her remark. Urges to hit the orange pegasus quickly became harder to resist with every word the child uttered. "I'm Scootaloo." The pegasus said with a wide smile bolted onto her face.
"I'm quite aware who you all are. Scootaloo, the rainbow pegasus's fangirl; Sweetie Ball, the clothes designers sister; and Appleblossom, the farmer's daughter."
"Sweetie Belle." the curly-maned filly corrected.
"Applejack ain't mah mom!" Applebloom barked.
"From what I've been briefed on, you three 'crusade' for cutie marks. I shall assume that is what we will be doing. Pray tell. What exactly does that entail?" Nightmare inquired in complete ignorance of Applebloom's outburst.
Wide grins, foreshadowing a terrible fate for the dark alicorn, stretched across the three friends' faces. Six hooves wrapped around Nightmare like tentacles, leaving no time to scream or resist. By the time the black filly could open her mouth, a deep blue helmet replaced her azure head piece.
"What the bu-" she tried to scream, but was quickly silenced when the garden of hooves that was the Crusaders slammed her into a red wagon. Shoved by the force of three excited fillies attempting to push by, Nightmare's helmet wobbled and fell over her eyes, temporarily blinding her. Soon soft buzzes filled the air and the sensation of motion came into being under Nightmare's rear.
"I'll get you for this, Sparkle!" Nightmare threatened before being dragged away by the town's most notorious children. Twilight chuckled at the threat.
Under the wagon multiple stones gently rocked the vessel, furthering Nightmare's irritation while she pried at the head protection with her rear legs.
"Pop" went the air around her when the large head piece gave way, returning vision to young Nightmare's eyes. Her gaze rested on the yellow and white fillies accompanying her on the trip to lord knew where.
"Where are you three taking me?" the alicorn hissed softly. Rage and fury burned hot in her tone.
"Miss Colgate said we can help her out with her dentist work." Sweetie Belle happily exposited, the exposed bits of her curled mane bouncing at every word.
Warm air filled the lungs of the trio. Joyful mouths hung open, in taking all the air they could hold. Nightmare leaned in to berate them on whatever it was they were doing. She was met with a deafening roar.
"Cutie Mark Crusader Dental Assistants! Yay!" they screamed to the heavens.
Nightmare gritted her teeth, greatly bothered by the shout. Letting the ring in her ears pass, she looked about, taking in the passing surroundings. Multiple forms of pony zipped by in her vision, each cheerfully taking to whatever activity they had at the moment. However, the alicorn noticed a common trait in all the equines they passed. Every one of them took time from their activity to shoot an angry scowl her way.
Used to hatred, Nightmare only bothered to focus on one. A stallion with a coat as black as night (obviously painted on as his natural brown coat broke through in many spots) with a deep blue mane, also painted on. His blue eyes shined in the light pouring through the tree he hid behind. At the sight of Nightmare, an eerie grin slid across his lips.
Nightmare raised a brow at the stallion but ignored him in favor of the next sight to behold. Coming across Sugarcube corner, all the Crusaders -plus their alicorn compatriot- turned head at the strange scene unfolding.
Pinkie stood ready with a massive candy cane battle axe in mouth. Twenty feet away from her rose a behemoth of sugar, flour, and eggs. Sweet buttery substance oozed from it spongy pores, giving off a wonderful peanut scent. Mr. and Mrs. Cake yelled as the being whipped them about in its sticky yellow tendrils. Pinkie wiped the beast's butterscotch secretions across her face to ready herself for battle.
Slender pink legs pushed against the ground and sent Pinkie charging into the air, where she would meet the beast one on one in mortal combat.
"Do ya'll hear music?" the apple farmer asked.
"Mortal Kombat!" screamed a voice out of nowhere, accompanying mysterious rock and roll.
Nightmare paused for a moment to soak in the idiocy before moaning "Just drive."
---
Despite the earlier odd happenings, the remainder of the Crusaders' trip proved peaceful. At least as long as Nightmare ignored the children's incessant bantering about their cutie marks.
"There's Colgate's office!" Scootaloo cried.
"Thank Faust." Nightmare responded, her head buried as deep as it could possibly go into her helmet.
Structurally, Colgate's office resembled a tooth, which Nightmare found fitting for a mare of her profession. Atop the structure rested a massive brush pushing back and forth in an endless cycle. Each brush brought about a wave of bubbles from under the bristles. Pushed away by the massive brush, the bubbles slid quickly down the sides of the tooth.
In front of Colgate's office stood the titular dentist, cavorting with a stallion. The stallion was a medially dark shade of blue. His mane was near white, but filled with hints of blue. Atop his head sat a massive horn, larger than any the fillies had seen before. Unlike other horns, which rounded off at the end, his jutted out further till it reached a single point.
Currently this stallion wore a smug smile as he spoke to the mare, occasion whipping his tail toward her, probably attempting to brush her legs. His smile soon turned to a vicious scowl when Nightmare and the Crusaders came into view.
"Thanks again for the help Colgate." he said.
"No problem. Anything I can do to help the community." She said with a smile, prompting him to leave.
Nightmare watched the scowling stallion trot away, her eyes locked onto his the whole time.
"Hello Crusaders!" Colgate softly shouted, gently trotting toward them.
"Hi Colgate." All the fillies but Nightmare responded.
"So. Are you ready to enter the wondrous world of floss and plaque?" Colgate asked, wearing an calm yet eerie smile.
Nightmare stepped back a few paces. Colgate was quick to notice, her eyes turning to the eldritch child (especially her mouth).
"It's going to be wonderful. I'm going to show you all the places on your teeth that make little fillies scream in pain and agony." She hissed, keeping the presentation of a friendly neighborhood dentist.
Sky blue energy wrapped around the children's frames before it jerked them into the air. Each filly released a shriek at the shock of being lifted without warning. Colgate paid no heed to their discomfort, instead she dragged them into her abode of drills and hygiene.
"Alright you succulent little fillies. What do you know about dentistry?"
"It hurts." said Scootaloo.
"Pinkie is scared of it." responded Sweetie Belle
"Ah have to brush mah teeth twice a day or th' tooth fairy will come an' beat me." Applebloom replied.
"The hay is dental hygiene?" Nightmare asked.
"Well. I think we have our first volunteer." Colgate happily exposited. An almost evil smile formed on her face.
"Volunteer?" Nightmare wore an expression of confusion. A plastic mask laying to her right came to life via Colgate's unicorn aura and made its way to Nightmare's face.
Suspicion was the child's natural instinct. No pony around town particularly liked the alicorn, so why would this creepy unicorn be any different. Strangely all that went away as the cup floated toward her.
Purple gas snaked from the mask, into the child's nostrils. At first, Nightmare struggled against the mysterious gas, but soon her hooves halted their flails and fell silent to the ground. Fear, hate, anger, all her usual emotions faded away to make way for a sensation of pure bliss.
Nightmare laid on the floor, foam dribbling out of her crooked smile.
"Is she supposed to be like that?" Applebloom asked.
"Indeed." Colgate answered far too happily. "Now stay there. I'm going to need your help." The snap of rubber gloves accompanied her declaration. The stench of plastic and mint drifted off the unicorn, passing onto Nightmare when the unicorn lifted the alicorn off the ground and into the dentist's chair. Colgate's threatening grin grew wider.
"Let's begin." She stated, wearing a malevolent smile.
Forty five minutes later, a melody of pattering hooves floated from the office. Nightmare strode out into the bright light, groaning when it scratched against her eyes. The crusaders followed their alicorn associate out of the massive tooth, careful not to let the excess suds from the top drip onto their coats. Though they wouldn't say it out loud, Nightmare's gas induced behavior amused them.
"Nah Applebum. You wuz a hippo when the mare be cleanin' muh grill. Yuz even shot the lazers from you eyes." Nightmare drawled, picking herself up from the ground. "a-and Scootaloo had a biiiiiig ol' beard. Heh. An' Sweetie was roo-but."
"Are you ah'right?" Applebloom asked, trying to hide a smile.
"Nah baby. Ah Clean." Nightmare spoke with a drooling smile on her face. A second later she fell over giggling like a madmare.
One full minute passed before the alicorn spoke again. Angry growls ripped from her throat, signaling to the Crusaders she was feeling better. Nightmare's returned to her hooves, her body mimicking the motion of a pendulum perfectly.
"I don't like that mare." She spat. "What's next on your list. Tell me it's far away from here." Her words were slow and choppy, still partially under the influence of the purple gas.
Sweetie Belle caressed the underside of her chin, trying to remember what the next of many tasks they had planned out was.
"We're going to Sweet Apple Acres." She exclaimed, holding up her hoof as if to point to something.
"Yeah. We're gonna see if cider makin' is our special talent!" Applebloom exposited.
"Cider? What's cider?" The Crusaders mouth's fell open. The alicorn swore she heard the creaking of metal leak from their jaws as they swung softly in the air.
"You ain't tried cider yet!? Well ya gotta try it now! Maybe ya'll won't be so grumpy if ya'll have some!" the apple farmer cried.
"I highly doubt that. I hate all of you. Have I not made that obvious? Honestly. Why aren't you running away?!" Nightmare shouted, her hooves fumbling against the rims of the steel wagon. Falling twice, Nightmare forced herself through a strange dizziness plaguing her and made her way into the vehicle.
"Well. Twah'light said you ain't got no powers and Princess Luna said we gotta play with ya'll." Applebloom answered, following Nightmare into the wagon alongside Sweetie Belle.
"That doesn't explain why you lack the common sense to run from me."
"Granny Smith says there's some good in everypony. Even them sales ponies who done tried to take our house."
"Sales ponies tried to take your house? That's just...wrong." The remaining two crusader's raised their brows. "Eternal night you all deserved, none of you ponies paid any attention to my wondrous night. But taking away homes, even I'm not that evil."
"Um. Actually Nightmare. Ah kinda like th' night. Not eternal night, jus' th' night." Applebloom said nervously. Under her, the wagon's wheels gained speed, bumping upward against every rock. The farmer focused on the black filly, rather than the gentle bumps of a wagon.
"Go on." Nightmare brushed a hoof against the air, occupying her remaining hoof with the task of adjusting her recently reequipped armor head piece.
"It's real fun fer sleepovers! " Sweetie Belle nodded in agreement with Applebloom.
"And the stars?" Nightmare questioned with a hint of eagerness in her tone.
"They're real purty too. 'specially durin' Zap Apple Harvest." Applebloom told the eldritch child.
"I think I like you, Applebloom was it? More fillies should be as wise as you."
---
Not too far behind the Crusaders, Colgate went about her business. She checked her toothbrushes, checked her floss, and checked her tools. This had been the fifth check today, few knew Colgate was somewhat anal retentive. Gently she clasped a tube of toothpaste and spread the mixture inside onto her brush. Commanding the brush to her mouth, she began to rub the paste vigorously against her teeth, releasing a loud pleased groan with every stroke.
Minutes later, she withdrew the brush from her mouth, panting hard. After washing it she brought the bristle to her face. Her soft lips slipped over the bristles.
"Oh Brushy." she moaned. "Oh Brushy! I love you!" she cried, planting kisses firmly on the brush's bristles.
"Am I interrupting anything?" asked a long horned stallion in the office entrance.
"Augh! Pokey!" Colgate screamed, hiding the brush. "What do you want?"
"Did it work?" he asked, eyeing the plastic mask Colgate previously placed on Nightmare.
"She'll be still as a statue when you meet her."
"Good. Then I must be off! I must serve my community!" He exclaimed before running back out the door.
"Freak..." Colgate muttered.
Dust rose from the ground, creating a trail behind Pokey Pierce. The wind brushed against his hair, forcing it to tumble like laundry as he stormed ahead. His hooves pounded furiously against the dirt, propelling him forward toward his target. Upon reaching the destination, a statue in the middle of town, he skidded to a stop to allow the wind to caress his mane while he begun a monologue.
"Oh vile beast of black and magic. You shall not get away. I shall avenge those you have wronged, beast of nightmare and eldritch terror. I, Sir Pokey Pierce of the Court of Fluttershy shall slay thee! Then I shall present thine wings as a trophy and woo fair Lady Shy! Then I shall woo Lady Pinkie as well!" Pokey said to the air around him.
"Mithta. Why are you talking to yourthelf?" Asked a filly beside him.
"Off I go!" He cried, knocking a pair of large red glasses off the filly and bruising her face with his gesticulating leg. Bright light filled the vicinity and with a flash Pokey pierce disappeared.
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Back with the Crusaders, the four found themselves discussing the uses of apples.
"It quite strange, but apples can ward off certain ghosts." Nightmare claimed.
"What? No they can't. Ghosts don't even exist." Scootaloo objected, turning her head slightly as to keep a good view of the road.
"They do, and some hate apples." She paused to wrinkle her nose "Hmph. Ghosts are the least worrisome monster you can find though." An evil smirk painted itself onto Nightmare's face. Nothing heinous was being planned, that much the Crusaders were sure of, but it was clear Nightmare knew something none of them did. Immediately their curiosity raised.
"What do you mean?" Sweetie Belle asked. Instinctively she clutched her tail, pulling it to her chest as if it were protection.
"Ghosts are little more than ants compared to some of the things out there. There are beasts that challenged Celestia and I's mother in the time before time itself existed. I think the closest description your modern words could conjure would be 'eldritch abomination'." the filly smiled coyly.
"They sound real scareh." Applebloom stuttered out.
"You have no idea". Immediately a flash sparked in front of the wagon.
Her heart skipped a beat and Scootaloo fell back onto the metal rims of the red wagon, her scooter continuing to press forward without her. Encouraged by the orange pegasus's weight, the wagon tilted forward, unloading its passengers atop the orange filly. Her scooter rolled as far as possible until the rope attaching it to the wagon reached its maximum length, then jerked back, flying into Scootaloo.
A collective groan rose from the pile of fillies under the overturned wagon. Around them the world spun and blurred. Sweetie Belle pressed her horn against a red blob she assumed was the wagon and flipped the object. Noisy metallic clanks proved her theory to be correct. Finished with the steel vehicle, Sweetie Belle outstretched her hooves to help up her friends, all the while taking notice of a strange blue blur.
All rising to their hooves, the fillies stared at the azure blur in their vision. Quickly their world became crisper and more in focus. Now able to see, they beheld before them the notorious balloon popper of Ponyville, Pokey Pierce.
"Mister Pokey? What are you doing here." Scootaloo asked.
"Hush child! I am here to cleanse Ponyville of this black monstrosity!" Seemingly out of nowhere a gentle wind blew across the unicorn's face, waving about his hair as if he were a romance novel hero. Closer inspection would reveal it to be simple horn magic.
"Mister Pokey. Ya'll ain't allowed to hurt Nightmare. Remember, at the town meetin'? Mayor said th' princesses don't want Nightmare bein' hurt." Applebloom stated.
"The beast has clouded your mind, child. Don't worry! I will protect you!" Light blue energy covered Pokey's horn. Applebloom raised a hoof to object to Pokey's actions, but immediately disappeared in flash of light. Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle were given no time to question Pokey, when they too disappeared in a flash, along with the wagon and scooter.
Luckily for the Crusaders, while Pokey was very adept at ramming his horn into balloons, magic had always been his weakness. As such, they rematerialized within a short distance of the cocky stallion, about two hundred feet away.
Once more feeling the dirt under their hooves, the three fillies began to shake their heads. None of them had involved in a teleportation before Pokey's little trick, so they all felt a tad bit of wooziness from their experience. Managing to shake off her dizziness, Applebloom scanned her surroundings. Nightmare wasn't there, meaning she was still with the likely crazy Pokey Pierce.
"Come on girls! We gotta save Nightmare!" Applebloom cried out. The other two Crusaders were somewhat hesitant to help the creature who once tried to bring about eternal night. However, they knew if they didn't the princesses would be disappointed, or worse, mad.
Fear surged through Nightmare's bones. Perhaps Pokey sensed this fear, because he began to smile and lick his lips when he turned to face the child. Mentally screaming at the fear to leave her be, Nightmare set her horn aglow. Not too far away, Chuck the beaver materialized beside the Crusaders, covered in a dark glow.
The saliva in the goddess's mouth drained quickly, leaving her mouth a barren desert. Reptilian eyes quivered at the sight of a smug smiled Pokey making his way leisurely toward the child. Common sense told her to run away and hide behind something. Her alicorn side told her to essentially be a suicidal pony and try to fight him. She found herself incapable of doing either, fear overtaking her body.
Blue energy caressed her frame. Gravity made an exception for Nightmare and allowed Pokey to telekinetically pluck her from The ground.
"Sir Angel told me all about you, vile creature. A good knight he is. Struck and harmed you with a clock." the stallion finished his sentence with a chuckle. "He proved something useful. You may be an alicorn, but as a filly you are still as mortal as I. So. Any last words monster?" Pokey positioned Nightmare's head directly above his horn. Nightmare choked out something about not wanting to die. "Nothing? Good. Nopony cares what you have to say anyway." the unicorn chirped.
"Cutie Mark Crusader Beaver Tossers! Yay!"
"Huh?"
Vicious moon-hating claws sped through the air. Fur and teeth latched tightly to Pokey's face. Chuck had discovered the one thing he despised more than the moon: the smell of Pokey pierce. Long buckteeth sank into Pokey's flesh, horn, whatever Chuck could reach.
Pokey howled in pain as he fell back. Around Nightmare, the blue aura that bound her against the force of gravity faded away. She produced a squeak akin to squeaky toy when she struck the ground.
"Cutie Mark Crusader Alicorn Savers! Yay!" the three children cried. Once more the six hooves of the trio wrapped around Nightmare to drag her off. However, this time it was not unwelcome. If it meant getting away from certain death, she would take it.
Minutes later, the door to the library flew open with a loud crash, striking the wall beside with enough force to leave a visible dent. A mix of colors piled through the entrance. The Crusaders shoved Nightmare into the library with the force of a bulldozer. Again, there was a deafening crash as the trio forced the door shut.
"Twah'Light! Mister Pokey's gone crazeh! He's tryin' to hurt Nightmare real bad!" Applebloom screamed.
Thump. The book Twilight read slammed shut, her focus now directed elsewhere. Lavender eyes turned themselves from the thick brown leather cover onto the mish mash of colors that was the Crusaders plus one. Annoyance washed across the unicorn's face.
"I'll take care of him..." She muttered. Twilight wasn't that surprised somepony wanted to kill Nightmare Moon. So many ponies hated Nightmare just because of what she was, Twilight knew an eventual attack was inevitable. She just hadn't expected it to be so soon.
"Lock the door while I put up a force field." the lavender unicorn sighed.
"Alright, Twilight." Scootaloo squeaked. The click of lock mechanisms became music to Twilight's ears.
Groaning she turned to head into the bowels of her book filled abode in search of a strong force field spell. Quietly she whispered a rant about never being able to finish her book, before beginning a trot. Her annoyance rose a little when Nightmare began request.
"Sparkle. Do you possess any cider?"
"I have a cup or two in the ice box. Why do you want it?" Twilight asked, suspicious of Nightmare's motives.
"Give it to me. Applebloom has informed me that this beverage is good." Twilight tilted her head in confusion. Nightmare had never before shown interest in anything modern. Immediately her eyes caught a small smile staining the filly's lips. Twilight grew a small smile of her own at the sight.
"Nightmare?" Twilight began.
"What?" she groaned, annoyed Twilight wasn't getting the cider.
"Did you learn anything today?"
"Actually. Yes. Your little friendship propaganda. It's not that bad." Nightmare paused a minute before she continued. "Don't think I'm about to obey you though. Your foalish 'friendship' is still pointless and terrible, just not that bad."
Twilight rolled her eyes and said "It's a start."
"Get me my cider, Sparkle..."
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Far off, a painted black stallion stood in the darkness of a secluded room, hovering over an altar. His blue eyes and painted azure mane shimmered in the faint light of his candles. Breathing heavily he whispered "Oh Beautiful Nightmare. Hear my prayer. I have found thy vessel. I ask of you, give me strength to deliver it. Make the true believers of night strong. Praise be to the Nightmare."
In the shadows, a thousand inky black tendril spilled onto the floor. They slithered about the stallion like snakes, secreting a color not on any visible spectrum. Hundreds of eyes opened in their darkness to scan the pony, to see his worth. In the pitch black a thousand teeth bared themselves and smiled their approval.
Interesting concept with plenty of potential for silliness. You have my attention
Hope this gets in featured. Epic prologue.
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Interesting story
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I do, I shall, I have, I am
Thou dost, thou shalt, thou hast, thou art
He/she/it doth, he shall, he hath, he is
We do, we shall, we have, we are
Ye do, ye shall, ye have, ye are
They do, they shall, they have, they are
("Ye" can be replaced by "you." In early modern English, "ye/you" is plural, "thou" is singular).
I'm pretty sure you used "thine" correctly, though, which is more than can be said for my first bumbling attempts at early modern English,
Interesting, I shall watch intensly
WHY DOES EVERYPONY HAVE TO MOVE IN WITH TWILIGHT? Sounds horrible.
Huh, featured at 260 views, 30 likes, and 7 comments. It wasn't even the bottom featured story.
Impressive. A little timing in your favor but to get so much in 3 hours is quite impressive.
I shall read this later.
>Filly Nightmare Moon living with Twilight
Deja vu...
>Pen Brush>Pen StrokeEDIT: DERP
Just pointing out the parallels. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt, though.
EDIT: Didn't read the rest of the description, sorry. It's still a little uncanny, though.
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For who? Twilight or the one who moves in?
1348197 The one who moves in, no way would I want to live with her, but for some reason, it doesn't sound so bad. Atleast she's nice... mostly.
This seems to be extremely common place of whenever Nightmare is turned into a filly. Some crazy pony is wanting eternal night without actually thinking through the consequences of it happening. I don't know about others, but freezing/starving to death is not the way I want to go.
I like it, keep going ^^
And truth to be told, i don't see to many parallels towards Past Sins so far.
> Nightmare Woon
Nope. I'll judge this book by its cover. Favourited SO HARD! I'll read it later.
A good start, indeed. I especially loved this part in the first chapter.
Hey, Twilight let's go perform experiments on a child.
YAY!
...at least that's what I imagined it was like when I read it.
1347941 Oh, fancy seeing you here.
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That's a good question. Why not Fluttershy or Applejack?
Honestly up until the point you mentioned Past Sins the similarity didn't occur to me. I was reminded more of dark woona from moonstuck.
beavers named Chuck? moon pies? Twist getting hit in the face? this story has everything! including... a surprisingly dark and foreboding ending to this chapter. you have my approval.
I've seen enough hentai...
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Huh. I never thought of it that way.
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Oh dear, incoming adorablness! Set phasers to aww!
cause twilight knows dem ponies (and shes secretly very lonely inside, spike is just not enough anymore) static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png
A few typos and awkward phrasing at points.
Very amusing though.
Nice story!
If Cake Is a Lie can hurt Celestia, MoonPie Is a Lie can also hurt Luna and Nightmare Woon..
Nice concept! GJ!
Pinkie Pie, Mortal Combat
Penstroke's got nothing on this.
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Honestly I think his story is better. Ol' Penny be a faaaaaaar better writer than me.
I just liked the concept and put my own spin on it. And of course had to include an eldritch abomination. Nothing is complete without an eldritch abomination.
Oh yeah, I definitely want more of this.
Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!
1348611 So i see. But Nyx i have mixed opinions in character development. Humor mixes well in your fic though something i look forward to.
Done reading, that was quite the laugh.
While there are some similarities it's definitely not Past Sins.
Anyway my only nitpick is that at certain points in the story things happen too quickly. It just felt like the story had holes.
Anyway other than that it was a good story and I happily await the next chapter.
Chaotic, messy, and jumps from point to point.
Sleepy, so I write poorly.
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CUTSIE WOOTSIE!!!
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Agreed, I do think that things could be passed slower though it feels like its going way too fast. That was part of what made Past Sins wonderful, it had good passing if you'll pardon the comparison, this would be wonderful if it went just a little slower.
Regardless:
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This is gonna to be so adoribly cute and funny I going die from it...isnt it? it cant be helped i guess
Soooo many mental images, all of them hilarious.
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Sorry, had to it. But in seriousness. Yes the story does have these problems, I'm going to try to make the next chapter less chaotic and flow better. I'll come back and fix the first chapter some other day.
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Depends. Do you find rude, somewhat snarky fillies who would gladly bring about the end of the world at the drop of a hat cute?
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1349000 Arnt all kids like that? anyway yes...yes I do
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Because Twilight is pony Jesus
"Cutie mark crusaders beaver tossers! Yay!"
I have GOT to stop reading in class...
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Oh man this is AWESOME! I can't wait to see more, Favorited in a heartbeat, and upvoted too. that picture you used for cover art is the epitome of D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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Yes. Yes she is.
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Just a quick couple additions/corrections from a certified Shakespeare geek.
The difference between thy & thine was mostly the same as the difference between modern "a" and "an", and this was also shown with my/mine in early modern English. Thy & my are used before words that begin with a consonant, thine/mine are used before words that begin with a vowel, or as the direct subject completion of "to be".
eg:
"This is my book, that is thy book. This book is mine, that book is thine."
"I read my book with mine eyes. Thou readest thy book with thine eyes."
(Perhaps not the best example. You will sometimes see "my eyes" rendered as "mine eyen", but "eyen" is an even older middle english construct that was archaic even by Shakespeare's day.)
Also, while thou is singular and you is plural, it was usually also used to show familiar versus formal, similar to modern French tu/vous, Spanish tu/Usted, or German du/Sie. You would use "thou" only for children, close friends and family members, and people you thought were inferior to yourself, and you would use "you/ye" for equals and your superiors, and usually strangers just to be safe. Princess Luna would have expected everypony to be calling her "you", and probably only Celestia would get away with thouing her.
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She is.
I´d just wish you would delete or change some stuff in your second chapter cause those few points really kills the mood of enjoying the fic. Like the "Thank Faust." or Nightmare Moon leaving a RAINBOW trail when leaping into the sky to pounce a moon pie. Really? Nothing against the moon pie, that was cute/funny, expect the "for the love of Celestia" part, but a rainbow trail? How? With what? Last time i checked NMM didn´t had a rainbow tail. Did she fart it or what?
It´s just minor stuff but it takes the fun out of other stuff like NMM going all "What? That´s evil!" when threaten to get no moopies for a month if she doesn´t play with the CMC.
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Luna talks in old english (Equish or whatever the language of Equestria is) Back in the days of knights and such, "shall" was "shalt".
Now... I was only about a quarter of the way through the chapter and I had to fave and like this. freaking EPIC.
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I just went with the idea that the rainboom leaves a rainbow trail no matter who it is. There's really no canon to how the thing works other then it makes, well, a rainboom. So yeah I just went with a rainbow trail for humor.
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i will read this later
i lvoelovelovelovelove mini moons fics, in fact i wrote one
I love the "Thank Faust" line. I might have to use that one some time.
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No, Luna talks in early modern English. Old English, or Anglo-Saxon, looks like rediculously mispelled Dutch or German, and uses letters and diacritics that don't exist in English anymore:
That's the Lord's Prayer in Old English. As you can see, this was not how Luna was talking.
(þ is pronounced like a th, by the way. It's called thorn. I þink we should use þorn in modern English, but þat's just me).
Knights and such back in þe day (okay, I'll stop...) would have spoken either Old English (until the 13th century or so) or Middle English (which was spoken until around the 16th century). Middle English is more readable than Old English, but still comes across as rediculously mispelled, and once more was not what Luna was speaking:
Again, the above is the Lord's Prayer.
Early modern English is, as the name suggests, essentially modern English, and is quite readable to a modern English speaker who's made it through 8th grade English (specifically the Shakespeare parts, although the Bard himself actually comes into play at near the end of early-modern's run) (unlike OE, which is essentially another language).
(Incidentally, sorry if I come across as prosetylizing for Christianity here. I'm actually an atheist, it's just that the Lord's Prayer is a piece of text that's easy to find in old, middle, early-modern, and modern English, and is fairly well known, so it demonstrates the differences pretty well).
In early modern English, "Shalt" is only correct when using the second person singular: thou shalt. Otherwise, it's as I showed:
I shall
thou shalt
he/she/it shall
we shall
ye (or you) shall
they shall
So thou shalt not kill, if talking directly to a single person, but ye shall not kill (or you shall not kill) if talking directly to multiple people.
As I said, a good rule of thumb is -st for second person singular, -th for third person singular.
"Likest thou jelly within thy doughnut?"
"Nay, but prithee, with frosting of white, and sprinkles 'pon its top."