Zack was once a normal boy, who loved going to conventions with his friend Milo. One day while in their hotel room, Zack received the Majora's mask. Gaining nature magic and fighting the curse of the mask, he made friend with Luna. However when darkness takes her away, Zack was lost into the darkness. Can he come back?
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Do your remember the name of the story you did the crossover with because i would like to read the story
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Sorry, it isn't uploaded yet
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Oh okay also can't wait for the next chapter this story is good also maybe we can do a crossover sometime
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Yeah sure! I have a few chapters ready that are a bit fast paced because of work. But I'll post them soon
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Cool
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I know your probably busy but can't wait for the next chapter 😊
Oh my f**king God! Twilight, Rainbow, and especially Celestia needs a f**king punch into their dumbass faces!
I just hope Luna doesn't easily forgive Celestia for being a paranoid idiot.
And I hope Twilight and Rainbow stop being lap dog idiots and think for a second. Otherwise, they need a ass kicking too.
A bit jarring being tossed into the future like this but an enjoyable story none the less, I enjoyed majora’s mask and I love my Zelda so I hope to see more of this soon cause hot damn is it a fun read!
This was a good chapter but I agree those three are idiots
Thanks to you all
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Your feedback is very helpful
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No problem
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Sorry everyone I forgot to add the link to the song Zack sang. I'm not sure if it's popping up, but if you click on the word sang in the flashback whenzack began to sing for sweetie belle it should take you to the link for the song
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It works
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Hey which season and episode is the present day chapter in?
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Season one in between episodes. I haven't decided yet
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K
This chapter's "pacing" is too fast, and all over the place!? Specifically from the beginning and middle.
Celestia seems too convinced to your main character's true innnonce rather too easily?
And this part make me want to slap myself of this ridiculousness;
What the hell is wrong with those two!? Celestia was talking about their dead parents, while Zack and even Luna ignore her and treated it as a damn joke to her!!??
How the heck can I treat this story "seriously", if they act like this!?
And while I agree with Zack that he should never forgive Celestia for what she did to him. He was too damn emotional near the end of this chapter, that he comes off as a hopeless crybaby.
Then strangely, Rainbow Dash of all ponies actually take his side rather quickly too. And while Twilight was acting as a utter fool of herself, Rainbow Dash becomes the smart one!?
Example;
Is this really the same Rainbow Dash from before? When she was also against Zack, but now side with him rather too quickly?
Speaking of Twilight; she is coming off as a racist/xenophobic and bias idiot!!!
Has she learned nothing from her lesson with Zecora!? Never judge a book by its cover!!!!
AND Nobody/nopony is freaking perfect, not even the princesses. It WON'T take a genius to know that, that's why it's pissing me off that Twilight's acting like this.
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Well... It does need editing and revisions....
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Also this is season one twilight, this isn't long after nightmare moon returned
I liked this chapter it was great