• Member Since 15th Nov, 2022
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Laze


hi

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I loved it, this short made me very curious, I look forward to (if I can) a complete story of it

Nice start to a longer story.

Yes this is nice, please go on

Alright, I'll make the story. It wont be fast because life, but I'll put the effort.

Still working on it. Writing wasn't my favorite, and the cover image is done, just need to do a few things.

Let's see where this goes, 'cause even I don't know, only idea's.

Doing a lot of research, trying to make it as "cannon" as possible.

Wait!" he stopped, looking at me. "Thank you, Mr Beast, I don't know what I would do if you hadn't come."

"Just don't follow me, and forget about this day... and dont call me MrBeast, that name has already been taken." Now I really wanted to know his name.

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(snort) exactly.:moustache:

If he does get flurry back to her room undetected. And also get to the portal room, they better not be waiting for him there.

"Just don't follow me, and forget about this day... and dont call me MrBeast, that name has already been taken." Now I really wanted to know his name.

MRBEA-

Yeah, animals that are living already side by side with humans ans still get scared by the sounds of cars & engines in general. So it isn't that surprising that Angel and the rest of the animals of the everfree will basically shit themselves by the sound of the bike's engine the exhaust and the human that drives it himself.

11732770
Yup, you got that right.

honestly, this whole chapter looks bad.

I can't wait for more keep up the good work

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Thanks. I do try to improve as much as possible.

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