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SaiakuMonoNarrator


I have a Ko-fi account now so that's new https://ko-fi.com/saiakumononarrator

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The story of how seven girls navigated high school and dealt with magical threats from a world of horses all while dealing with romances within their group and a slightly burnt out used to be mean girl

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The adventures of the Equestria Girls.

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The series I wanted but never got so this is the next best thing šŸ˜…

The first two chapters are trailers, just thought Iā€™d say that

Hereā€™s a petition to save Equestria Girls, only 315 more to go!

https://www.change.org/p/boulder-media-can-boulder-media-save-the-equestria-girls-series?redirect=false

Also I now have Ko-Fi so if anyone wants to donate:

https://ko-fi.com/saiakumononarrator

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Hereā€™s a petition to save Equestria Girls, only 322 more to go!

Don't get me wrong, I'd love to see Equestria Girls get continued, but why should I trust a URL with "redirect=false" in it?

Friendo, Equestria Girls is not coming back. Generation Four has concluded. Petitions are not going to do anything.

Comment posted by SaiakuMonoNarrator deleted Apr 30th, 2023

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Yeah I know, but itā€™s nice to hope.

How have you enjoyed the story? Any reviews or criticisms?

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Fair point, but I clicked and it worked for me. So at the very least I can say itā€™s authentic. Sorry if thatā€™s not enough, how have you enjoyed the story? Any criticisms

Hereā€™s a petition to save Equestria Girls, only 320 more to go!

https://www.change.org/p/boulder-media-can-boulder-media-save-the-equestria-girls-series?redirect=false

Dude it's been years now. If it was still right when G4 was coming to an end sure, but now? Just let it go and simply enjoy the still thriving fandom still producing their own fanmade content.

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Look, I get it, it's probably not gonna come back. But I figure there's no point in not trying and this literally takes less than a minute and I'm not forcing anyone to sign I'm just advertising it while I write this. I'm a loser who can't stop getting hung up on the fact that equestria girls never got a proper ending. There, happy? I don't have a life so I mooch onto something bigger than me. It's here for EVERYPONY who so much as looks at it to see.

I AM A LOSER.

On that note, mind telling me what you think of the story? I genuinely just posted it here to add to the fandom and get reviews/ criticism/ feedback/ for my work.

Also sorry if that was too harsh, I am just sick of constantly being mocked for adding when it doesn't take anything from my time and I figured 'You know what? Why not? I'd want someone to advertise my petition if I made one.'

ā€œYouā€™ve been going out to the city to fight crime! Do you know how reckless that is!?ā€ She yelled angrily.

Not any more reckless than the magical threats they faced in the past. She gets angry at her using her powers for good despite them using and are continue going to use them to fight against magical threats? What is with the hypocrisy here?

ā€œYacht, yes I was there. One little problem with your argument, we solve issues that encounter us . We donā€™t actively look for a fight! We are highschool students, not someā€¦ā€ She tried to figure out a word as she gestured to her. ā€œTeenage vigilantes! Itā€™s reckless, and stupid, and a waste of time!ā€

Some of them have. Not all and they will continue to fight against and go out of their way to fight against threats in the future, so the hypcrisy still stands.

ā€œSunset,ā€ She turned around to see Twilight behind her. ā€œHave you considered that the reason your so mad about Rainbow going off to fight crime is because it stems from a deeper fear of something-ā€ Flashes of her friends on the floor bleeding flew through her mind.

Why did she say that out of the blue? If you are going to have Twilight play therapist at least build up to it by having them chat a little more after Rainbow leaves. This is coming across as lazy writing because you must have the plot happen without it being natural.

Albeit she didnā€™t see any consequences that could come from this, she knew there were, there always were. And it wasnā€™t as if she didnā€™t get where Rainbow was coming from, though she couldnā€™t see how her powers could save someone from being mugged.

Who's powers? Rainbow's. Well, evidently not since she did so.

ā€œAttention students.ā€ Vice Principal Luna's voice rang over the speakers. ā€œTo combat students being tardy to class, me and the officials of the school have implemented a new policy. On randomly picked days, which shall only be revealed 10 minutes before classes start, and students who fail to show up to class without a proper excuse or are late, will be suspended-ā€

Why would it only apply on random days. Why not just make it a permanet change that applies every day from now on? Oh, because things must be tense right now because plot. Wait... my suggestion would still make it so and be better written. Oh... I don't know. Plot.

ā€œYou have a spare to her house?ā€

ā€œI have one to all of your houses.ā€ She said offhandedly before continuing. ā€œCan you do it Rarity?ā€ She said as she tossed her a key.

What? How does she have spare keys to all of their houses without them knowing? Also, why do they shrug it off as no big deal when it's creepy. Yeah, this fic is starting to turn into a major turn off, but I will try to at least get through this chapter.

After skimming the rest. This fic is nothing specia. It isn't bad, but it doesn't hook me in. There haven't been anything else to make it more unpleasant to read, so I guess I will read more later.

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Look, I get it, it's probably not gonna come back. But I figure there's no point in not trying and this literally takes less than a minute and I'm not forcing anyone to sign I'm just advertising it while I write this. I'm a loser who can't stop getting hung up on the fact that equestria girls never got a proper ending. There, happy? I don't have a life so I mooch onto something bigger than me. It's here for EVERYPONY who so much as looks at it to see.

I AM A LOSER.

Chill! All I said was to try and let it go since it has been years now. I get it you care but now it's time for you to again let it go and enjoy what we have. A thriving community of fans adding more stories and adventures to make up for it. Don't call yourself a loser and enjoy what we have here on this site.

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Yeah looking back on it now I was trying to introduce this. I should probably find someone to proofread this. Any suggestions?

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Yeah sorry about that, Iā€™ve been really stressed lately.

Thanks for the advice.

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So I made some edits, and this is something I should've said a while ago.

Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you cared enough to make such criticisms. Because of them I have help in making a story about the show I love every much.

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