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Pinkie and Twilight enjoy a quiet moment together, until Pinkie starts headbutting Twilight.

Written for TwiPie Week 2023 Day 3 on Twitter. I chose the prompt 'Forehead Touching' today.

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The Iguana Man #1 · Apr 6th, 2023 · · ·

Pretty nice little bit of fluff. Although, when a character speaks, you probably shouldn't immediately afterwards describe another character's actions without a paragraph break. Makes things a little confusing.

GreyTheGriffon #2 · Apr 6th, 2023 · · ·

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Noted. Thank you very much for the constructive criticism :)

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