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The cutie Mark crusaders can't take it anymore. People telling them what to do, how they will never get their cutie marks, being blank flanks forever and how everybody ignores them and doesn't understand their pain. Normally they would try to forget about it and not listen to them but this day and this time it was different.

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Seems like it could do with a light proofreading pass, I see some weird inconsistencies on the CMC's names in dialog, especially with capitalization.

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Thank you so much for this, it helps me so I know what I should do better in the next chapter, I really appreciate it and again thank you!

Comment posted by Twiliight deleted Mar 21st, 2023

Ah I LOVE this so much I can't wait to see the next part!! :twilightsheepish:

how everybody ignores them and doesn't understand their pain.

Why wouldn't their sisters help them?

11548369 Cause their sisters never helped them in the show, like for instance the babs seed episode

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