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Mother's day

It's finally here Mother's Day and everyone's parents and spending quality family time with eachother but when Scootaloo's figures out something shocking what will she do?

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Isseus

Isseus #1 · Mar 20th, 2023 · 2 · ·

You might want to see what tags like tragedy and sad actually mean, as this wasn't really neither of those. It was also pretty rushed, bouncing from tense to tense and a bit hard to follow, so just take your time when writing. Those are stuff you'll easily notice if you give it another read through before posting. You're not in a hurry.