Following her ruined vacation on Once Upon a Zeppelin, Twilight brews over what was ruined and went wrong. As she does, unexpected visitors come to her doorstep and are determined to give her what she's deserved: Her family giving her their apologies and a show she missed.
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Great story!
While one wrong has been fixed, what about the other?
Such as the writers making Spike miss out on the trip and practically wrote him off since we don't even saw him afterwards.
He's family too.
Their one to talk, they made Twilight take their job
What happened was their fault too for makign Twilight a princess in the forst place!
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I suppose so, that's on the writers though.
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As for Spike, I don't really know what his reason for not coming was, maybe he voluntarily stayed behind? I'm not sure so I can't exactly write about him too. But thank you for the review!
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Thank you!
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The writers made him choose to handle Twilight's paperwork while she goes on the trip.
They did him dirty by making him miss out, doesn't help that they didn't even bother to show how he was doing afterwards.
Basically they used the paperwork as an excuse to write him off.
It feels wrong since he was family too.
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You're very welcome.
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Really, it was Celestia looking for someone to dump the job on.
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Couldn't have saud it better myself!
That was a good story.
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Thank you!