• Member Since 12th Oct, 2022
  • offline last seen Oct 25th, 2022

White Rabbit


Comments ( 12 )

Excellent work on the story! Keep it up!

11394200
Thanks for the kind words bud.

Nice job on the story. Can't wait to see how you do with the rest of the Rainbooms.

11394515
Thanks for the kind words.

It was great. Although I don’t know if it was intentional or not, but you didn’t say if they made love while he had his clothes on or not because you only said she zipped his pants down and that was it you didn’t say if he took off the rest of his clothes or not.

11394622
My bad. I guess I should have cleared that out. Thanks for the feedback, I’m just glad you enjoyed it. Hope you’ll look forward to more.

11394680
You could rewrite it if you want to. I’ve given some feedback to someone else’s story and they were able to add rewrite it.

11394738
Maybe. I'll think about. Again, thanks for liking this story. Means so much that my first story is a hit for many people. Any idea on who you would like me to do?

11394751
Either Applejack or Sci Twi please.

11394790
Thanks for those suggestions.

Heya you remember the dusk shine harem comedy story you made im wanting to reader the 2nd book thats password locked

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