Derpy Hooves is a young foal whom one day recieves a letter. A week later, Derpy is sent to Canterlot as a new recruit of C.W.T.A - Canterlot War Training Academy! Upon arriving, she realizes two things...........A war is raging and her main teacher is involved in it! But who is this mystery teacher? What is this war? Will young Derpy Hooves graduate from C.W.T.A. and become a warrior, or will this be to great a challenge and she will go home?
NOTE: In the early chapters, Derpy is a year younger then an average school filly/colt!
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Wow, for a ten year old thisis really impressive, I love Derpy Hooves, my favorite pony of all time but please be sure to add much more detail if you will, there are a few spelling and grammer errors and this seem to fast paced, will be awaiting more, peace.
Like inferno said, the notion if you being ten impressed me. The story so far is a bit interesting, and its rather well typed out.
Also about that cover image, you did get permission for it right? The image was actually used for a story by aegis shield and I believe he had someone make it for him. So Idk if you need his or the original artists permission to use it.
Interesting. Interesting concept to say the least.
Tracking!
that was a piece of crap... A HILARIOUS PIECE OF CRAP LOL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
(read my story btw) IF THOU DARE!!!!! srsly, it's only like 100 words and all worth it!!
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Thanks for the criticism, guys! I'll be writing a new chapter soon!~
i like this story good jod
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Of course I got permission!
this seems like a great idea! i'd love to read more!