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Holy shit that was terrifying
....Damn
Ok that is definitely terrifying since it is some kind of monster which attacks in complete darkness and which kills in a very horrible way, so without the light of a candle or something that illuminates these completely fucked up and poor fillies died without any hope of salvation.
Couple grammar mistakes and an odd use of 'yawl', but it wasn't a bad idea.
Always a good move to split your writers block with something.
Very interesting. Would've liked to know about the monster but otherwise, this was a good story.
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Thank you! I'm sure that the monster in your head is way scarier then any description I could have made.
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I was never good at spelling but I'm making a effort to improve, I think this story helped a lot with writers block and I'm glad it did.
Thank everyone for their comments and likes, makes me feel like I'm getting better at something I thought I had no talent in.
The magic of this story is the reliance on the reader's imagination and their fear of the unknown. These are the stories you keep thinking about when you're in bed trying to fall asleep. I love the emphasis on the negative space. Hard to find horror that hits the spot like this.
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Thank you!
Also btw your art for your stories are amazing! I really enjoy those styles!
I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Horror of the unknown is the horror I love the most and it will never not freak me out. I really wasn't sure if anyone would like this story but I'm glad to see all of the positive comments, It really makes it worth it in the end!
I’ve never seen this idea done before so you’ve definitely earned your upvote.
This was REALLY good. Mostly tragic though.