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Gamerboygaming


Hey! Gamerboygaming here! I lost a challenge and now I'm addicted to ponies. Send help. I also write stories occasionally.

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This story is a sequel to Meeting of the Elements


Short stories based on the concept of each Element having their own conscious.
Reading the Prequel isn't necessary for this story, but it gives you a good idea on what to expect.

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Comments ( 17 )

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likely not, no though we'll see where this takes me

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I just think of this


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"ELEMENTS, DO YOU FEEL THAT!!? I FEEL SOMETHING WE HAVEN'T FELT IN A LONG TIME!"

Magic thought for a moment before proposing something, “The Crystal Empire should be showing itself soon and Sombra will be likely to return. If there are no major disasters between them and now, I say we go back to what we did before.”

what about Discord?
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Magic sighed, “In any case, is that fine with everyelement?”

every element
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Magic stopped the connection, "Well, since we're going to be here for a bit... anyelement have cards?"

any element

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11422627
these are intentional.
its like everypony and anypony except for the elements

11422625
he'll be here soon enough. i have a few ideas with him.

Oh no. This was the first sign Celestia was a f:flutterrage:king idiot. Taking the Elements away when they were safer with Twilight. I doubt she would have used them on literally everything.

Should be fun how this turns out to be an even bigger train wreck than in canon. Faved and upvoted for sure.

11422882
ive never figured out why she did that in canon. like, there was no reason to keep them and yet she basically laid them out for discord to just grab

11422908
Well Celly plays the long game and she has prophetic visions, so there is a good chance she took them away so Discord wouldn't directly target the bears first. Also shared hardship can strengthen friendships, by beating Discord's branwashing with out the elements the girls connections grew stronger.
Chyrsilis that was just... No one said prophetic visions predict everything. She never expected or planned for changelings. So legit mistake.
Sombra, well the Crystal Heart had to destory him to fix the Crystal Ponies, if they just blasted Sombra with the Elements the Crystal Ponies would still be all depressed and suffering amnesia.
I'm always see Celly as being very cloak and dagger about her plans because ponies panic very easily, she's old enough and has seen it enough times to know what will make her subjects embrace herd mentality. She knows of she lets them know too much the will freak out.

Would it be better if you swap the saying to 'every being'? typing out everyelement sounds cringy and effort.

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Kind of. If they were actual entities in the show though, this would likely be what they would be referred to as. I’ve learned to find the humor in the “Every[insert creature here]” talk. Though, it also may be a bit hard to read. I’ll think about it.

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Since they're the 'Spirits' of the Elements. just go with "Everyspirit" "Anyspirit?"

This is sadly cancelled, I see.
May I ask why?

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I’ve realized how much of the lore I got wrong about the elements and decided it best to just remake this at a later date when I have more information.

11552433 Ah, okay.
Yeah, that DOES make sense.
Cool.
I'll be looking forward to the new version whenever you post it.

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