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Sterling the pegasus


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Starlight Glimmer wants to test a new spell to help her tie up animals in case they run loose on Applejack's farm. Without any creatures to test it on though, she decides to do it herself. Let's just say she's a little 'tied up' with things when Twilight comes in to see what's wrong. (This is my first story, leave any feedback you want!)

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Cute story, it was a nice read. You probably could get away with rating this teen because it's mostly innuendo and doesn't have any real strong language.

Not bad for a first story. :)

Edit: Oh so now I'm not allowed to compliment a first story? WHAT THE FUCK PEOPLE!

I swear to god the trolls should all be banned from the internet. They're the reason it's such a toxic place.

Starlight Glimmer wants to test a new spell to help her tie up animals in case they run loose on Applejack's farm.

Wouldn't she just use a rope for that, though? :rainbowhuh:

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Yeah i thought about that, naturally you would just use a rope, but Starlight being Starlight, she'd always try to come up with some spell to 'make it easier' to do right?

11308549 Given all of the times this strategy ended up blowing up in her face, I think she stopped doing that by the time season 8 came about.

A cute funny little comedy ficlit I liked it I don't think it needs the mature tag though

This was a funny little story to be sure. It almost felt like it was over too quickly though; I would have liked to see the comedy stretched out a bit. Aside from that, there were a few mechanical errors, but on the whole, it was pretty good.

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