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Likes commenting. also, not everything HAS to make sense... why? well, what fun is there in making sense?

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One day, a terribly long time ago, long before Equestria was even an idea, there was a single earth pony colt trying to desperately survive in a forest. Then suddenly, he was found, but it wasn't a pony who found him...


The Core Stories of Long Before: Book One.

Feedback, criticism and grammar corrections for this and my future stories will be very appreciated, but don't be rude about it.

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That was very good, I would love to see this as a full story.

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Yea, im good at worldbuilding but i suck at…

People. Personalities. Social constructs.
Irl, i have a problem reading faces and tone of voice. Its probably because of my ADHD or maybe i just never learned how to person.

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Same here I just suck at everything that comes to storytelling lol

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Currently writing the prologue of book two, which starts off at the end of this one. Literally, i just copy-pasted the last Aerlan bit and added onto it.

Also, just in case there are pronunciation problems, its pronounced Air-Lan.

Comment posted by RandomCommentor deleted Aug 26th, 2023
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