Lost in Life, Found after Death.

This story is a sequel to Forest of Beginnings and Endings

One day, Thousands of years before even Celestia and Luna were born, there was an earth pony colt.

After losing his family, his village, and almost losing his life, he was given a chance.

A chance to do what? I don't have a clue and neither does he.

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Endings and Beginnings · 9th Sep 2023 · 2,016 words
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Cyvern and the beginning of the universe. · 16th Sep 2023 · 2,490 words
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RandomCommentor #1 · Sep 11th, 2023 · · · Endings and Beginnings ·

🤷 tried to do a thing. Might go somewhere with it.

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Lost_Data #2 · Sep 11th, 2023 · · · Endings and Beginnings ·

As Cyvern gets to the part where fell onto the unicorn, the kitsune nods in approval. “Interesting strategy, and smart too. The pegasus would likely have flown upwards and made you fall and an alicorn is simply too strong to fight. Attacking the unicorn was the correct choice as it was the weakest link from what you’ve explained.” She says, a smile growing across her face.

I think you need a 'he' contained in here.

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Lost_Data #3 · Sep 11th, 2023 · · · Endings and Beginnings ·

Cyvern’s eyes widen. “Wait, does that mean ill turn back?”

I'll*

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RandomCommentor #4 · Sep 11th, 2023 · · · Endings and Beginnings ·

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Corrected.

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RandomCommentor #5 · Sep 11th, 2023 · · · Endings and Beginnings ·

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Donezo.

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Lost_Data #6 · Sep 11th, 2023 · · · Endings and Beginnings ·

Cheers! I'll be will to see more of this from now on. Whenever it does get added on.

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RandomCommentor #7 · Sep 11th, 2023 · · · Endings and Beginnings ·

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I just wanna say, that if you haven't been so helpful, i feel that my stories wouldn't have increased in … I’m reluctant to say “quality” but you've certainly helped!

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