After the battle against Tirek, just when everything was beginning to calm down, disaster strikes again, and it's not from an unholy creature of burden, but a pony. A normal pony layered with an ancient sickness and plagued with nightmares.
Taken into custody by the Canterlot guards and put in confinement where the stallion is constantly monitored and observed, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Princess Cadance, and Princess Twilight Sparkle will attempt to help the forlorn stallion no matter the case.
If the four princesses don't work fast, it may lead to his destruction.
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Oh, damn. That hits...too close to home.
Your writing is incredible.
Very well done, 14/10.
-Harpy
This is a very interesting story, keep up the good work :)
I can't say that I'm impressed with this story. You took the risk of basing a story around an OC, which can certainly be done well, but it requires a very strong and endearing character to keep the audience's attention. Your main character Sunde feels very one-dimensional, which makes him feel more like a plot element for the other characters to respond to. Having his whole character revolve around his tragic backstory is unoriginal, bland, and to some extent, goes against the tone of the show for no positive reason.