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theSilentInventor401


Technology can seem like magic. Why don't we combine the two and see if that's true?

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Life in Equestria was suddenly changed when Celestia returned to the throne, demanding it back. The world found itself with the Eternal Sun, scorching the land for years to come. Though with every tribulation life will adapt. Starlight Glimmer has adapted to her new environment, despite being Celestia's number one target. She finds herself on the run, at all times.

She never knows when one of the Elements of Harmony would be after her skin. Normally a visit from her friends would be much appreciated. Though not after Celestia twisted robotics into their biological shells. Now, they serve her, forced or willing. No pony knows.

Though not all of the Elements remain. Twilight Sparkle, Luna, and Cadence all disappeared without a trace when Celestia overtook Canterlot. Starlight remains of their old friend group and she still searches for them, and a method to free the rest of her friends. Her search is cut short when an old friend comes to her in a foreign vehicle.

Sunset shimmer appears before Starlight and she is keenly aware of the situation.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

An interesting premise... I like it!

In love with this story, can't wait to see how it turns out! So far, I'm loving Celestia's character and her willingness to use the elements as generals to squash any rebellion under her watchful eye. The little happiness the mane 4 have scraped together in the one place they can be themselves is nice too.

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Thank you for the feedback! :twilightsmile: It's nice to see I'm communicating my thoughts correctly :yay:

Are you going to continue this story ?

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Don't worry :pinkiehappy: I will.
The next chapter is in final revision and editing. Sorry for the wait! But I've been unsure of my writing style recently. It seems to change every week :facehoof:

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