Nightmare moon returns and kills her sister and takes over Equestria and runs it her way.
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Fast Hack
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The description is pretty lack luster, there isn't really anything interesting you aren't telling us about the story except all of it.
The fact that this is your fourth fiction (!) told me, that improvement got nothing to do with mass. If the person doesn't care about improving, he simply won't get any better.
I'm not quite sure if this is "serious" or just trolling the side and fictions themselves.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
I just read an epic fail. I'm not trying to be rude, but you need to fix the story up
not you need commas, spell check, and capitalization. Also you need to put in more details. I don't know if you tried to, but this just sounds like a children's book.:-S
Fast Hack... huh, well it appears your username describes your writing style quite appropriately.
Like i have said before u need more detail u need to explain why something is happen
................................. what?
Im Confused
I have noooooooooo idea what I just read.
Not bad. It needs a little more description, especially near the end, but it's a good idea and I love Nightmare Moon fics.
Upvote. It's so bad it's good. I honestly laughed a lot.