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DragonBorne
Hi, I created this account to share my own stories about that I wrote during my free time. Enjoy them.
DragonBorne
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So... Anyone can talk, just be nice and educated as you talk or say anything about the story, be constructive, no need to be rude and as a warning, I really hate when someone is rude with someone else, so please, do not be rude with each other.
Pd. This commentary was made not to be... Y'know, mean or something like that, but I had really bad experiences with other sites, so please, be a gentlecolt.
Pd2. I really like the show, but I do not think that I am going to follow the Canon... But I think that in the future he will meet the Mane Six, so do not get angry haha
Pd3. ¿Are you still reading this? C'mon, take a chocolate for being such a nice pony🍫
Hmm, very interesting. I like where this is going. Would you be at all interested in having my Displaced characters, a Kingdom Hearts 3 version of Kairi, Melissa Shields from the first BNHA movie, and Mirajane from Fairy Tail, be the first Displaced your character summons?
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I am not interested in a crossover for now, but it might change in the future! It's just I want to put the settings of the story in order before putting a external character into the story
But thank you for your offer! I'd love to have a crossover in the future.
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Just be careful how you go about the cross-over as it can make or break a story.
Can't wait for next chapter 😊
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No worries, I understand. I did the same thing, but I actually started planning the crossovers several chapters in advance. I shall wait patiently for when you're ready
Not sure how to feel about this, but I must say that you've done a great job in translating the feeling of alien within the MC's body. Like how he feels that non of what's going on is right, that something within him is wrong. Great job.
Another thing that I noticed however, though I'm not sure if this was intentional since you mentioned that he had a mexican grandmother. I didn't know what the word aserrin meant until I looked it up, but from what I could find, it's spanish for sawdust. Mixing language in this way may confuse readers, because it confused me.
I'm not sure how I feel about this fic yet, but I'm going to track it and see were it goes. I'm usually not a fan of fics that get too dark with the whole antagonization of Celestia and Luna, so I'll wait and see what they and the rest of the ponies will do and then I'll make my judgement.
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Wait, what? Did I missed the word acerrin? Oh my, sorry for that, I think I made that mistake because I was about to fall asleep and I think that I mixed up the languages for how tired I was, I'm gonna fix it in the next chapter of the story.
Pd. I already wrote another three, but I am fixing some mistakes and other stuff.